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"HOLD ON MEH"
  by le-nae


As i prepare my thought i want to take a moment to say
you have made me better
Well first off im not tryna badger you I was told to follow my heart and that's
What im tryna do
I feel the obstruction between us;Which makes more vexation to my heart
YOUR AROMA
It's a scent I never want to loose; Your so astonishing your all i would choose
I yearn for you on a daily basis
I believe our love could grow to be everlasting if you just stop and work it out
Give it a try
Being without you is so coplecating; I'd conqueer your heart just to astound you
Trust in you is all i do
To loose you is what i refuse
I'd be held accountable forthis mistake
But if you promise to compromise;I'd never betray you
Love you endlessly is what I'd do
You keep my heart with such anticipation
The way you are concieted is so remarkable
My love you is never questionable
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Date Submitted: Oct 07, 2009 (05:05 PM)
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  Embonpoint
10/07/09 (09:07 PM) 
The depth and tone of this piece were nice and overall this piece has great potential, there are a few spelling issues that should be addressed . . . nice job.

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