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"Hold Your Innocence"
  by BabyBoySpik


Hold your innocence
You should never let it go
At a young age where you are gullible
Caught in the temptation of that feeling desired
Thinking it may take your relationship higher
But once you lose it, you cant get it back
Then this boy leaves you, and you dont know how to act
Holding your head cuz you thought it was love
Not really understanding what it consist of
Now you're crying this river of tears
Heart won't be mended for so many years
Just because you had to be like your other peers
Thought it was cool, but then only brought fears
Fears for all your future relations
Holding in your head all this frustration
But then this story may only get deeper
Of course since you thought this dude was a keeper
It's hard to decide between love and lust
I guess it doesnt matter when that condom did bust
But you leave it alone cuz this love was a fact
Didnt realize how he would react
Its a shame how a boy can just up and leave
Now your left alone with this baby conceived
All because you where just so naive
He said "no matter what"
And every word you believed
That is why I say you should hold your innocence
Nothing is wrong with choosing abstinence
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Date Submitted: Apr 03, 2007 (07:00 PM)
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  Mesha_mi
01/25/08 (12:27 AM) 
now thats hot i wish I had more of this in my ear when that time came but no regrets

  Cringe @ your ...
01/12/08 (01:26 AM) 
wow i think this is a brave piece. you dare to step outside the box and talk about something ppl try to sweep under the rug and i comend you for that. i also love the flow of this piece you did a great job keeping the attention of the reader. and i think your message was effective. nice work!

  3rd Son
12/28/07 (03:57 AM) 
wow this is excellent man! U need to scream this from on top of a mountain or channel 5 news or Maure LOL I like your writing style though the lines blend together and what you speak is truth so its not annoying and it doesnt feel like you were just trying to rhyme a sentence good art homie

  crazydaisy92
04/29/07 (09:20 PM) 
very nicely written and very nice message...good job puttin those feelins on paper...

  dough
04/07/07 (11:52 PM) 
omg if dat wasnt da most sweetist thing i hav eva heard a boy write...to hear dis 4rm a bot i think gurls r more happy bout dis poem... keep writing boy

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