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"HOLDING YOU DOWN"
  by K.A.S. THE LYRICAL GANGSTER
  - This Poem is a response to the poem controlled by ♥ F1 Wesley


HOLDING YOU DOWN
Let me give you some of my controlling techniques
no more exercise of restraint
assume the position imma pleasure you like others can’t
giving some pleasing heat to that enticing physique

I gotta nine pointed in your direction
i’m coming over to dominate
supervise skillful heavy structured pen.etration
commanding you not to make a peep
as I drop anchor and sink deep
delivering direct hot passion digging into sweet secrets to demonstrate
how I make rivers overflow

holding you down

Tracing your silhouette with my tongue
outlining your sexy tenderness real slow
removing all your clothes
naked from head to toe
only thing you wearing is a blindfold
I got you handcuffed by the wrist
not too tight
but restrained the way you like

I tease you with my master key
unlocking a hard rain that precipitates over us
a cloudburst pouring drowning our lust
now we change positions so I can get you wetter
making you really lose total control a desired rush

Warm water running over you
as I place you in the shower
i insert coke bottle thickness
and like rain you shower
streams of excitement
extreme water lubricated friction
leads to our contentment

you won’t stay still
but I’m holding you down with my steal
full of energy that I sexually devour to my fill
just like that
you’ve experienced my erotic reign
I gave you some control to feel
sexually entertained
while holding you down



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Date Submitted: Sep 06, 2009 (07:28 AM)
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  mmd2888
09/12/09 (05:19 PM) 
This is a hot write... playing to woman's secret sexual desires... or not so secret lol

  ۞ F1 Wes...
09/11/09 (08:53 PM) 
the first stanza got me nekkid..the 2nd opened the golden gates....no need to say more..you already know...this was well needed...good to know it can be written...hello

  *Miss Toya*
09/07/09 (02:26 AM) 
this was very hot k.a.s....you really turned up the heat in this one "Tracing your silhouette with my tongue " that had to be my favorite part of this one well not my favorite favorite part...my most favorite part was "I tease you with my master key unlocking a hard rain that precipitates over us " and nice song choice too...very nice

  tak3 flyt 23
09/07/09 (01:54 AM) 
deep

  BRANNU
09/07/09 (12:30 AM) 
wow!!! great response and you held it down puttin it down lol

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