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"Hopeful dreamin'"
  by Blackdymend


It’s about…

Meeting that special guy who catches your eye

The one in your dreams you see every night

…God’s greatest creation

Despite him not having the best reputation

He’s the one you pray is Mr. Right

The one who can smooth talk his way out of any fight

With a “baby I’m sorry, I’ll never do it again”

You sit there and take it, while backwards you bend

But when will it end?

The one who could never admit to his faults

And you sit there and take it, while inward you hurt

Got you questioning, why you put up with his dirt?


It’s about…

Being that girl that can change his trifling ways

Not to change him per say

But to make him see that things ain’t okay

To be the one who can always be seen by his side

The girl in which he knowingly confides

And no matter what they go through

His love for her can not be denied

Ultimately, she hopes for the highest prize

The idea of being his wife

To share his life

And maybe, be blessed to one day have his baby

I think these are the hopes of many young women today
Some succeed, and some get lost on the way
I could be wrong so I can only speak for myself
And so I apologize to all those good guys
who unfortunately do finish last
Maybe one day, they will be recognized
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Date Submitted: Mar 05, 2008 (02:14 AM)
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  mindbenda
03/10/08 (01:52 AM) 
very nice write great work easy ten starzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz

  Eryn
03/07/08 (01:21 AM) 
THIS IS TRUELY A PIECE MOST GURLS CAN REALLY RELATE TO! I INCLUDED! IT'Z ALOT OF GUYS I LET GO FOR THAT 1 GUY I COULD NOT GIVE UP ON BUT UR HEART CHOOSES WHO IT WANTZ U HAVE NO CONTROL OVA IT! BUT GURL THIS IS SOOOO HOT! I LOVE THIS! 10 STARZ 4RM ERYN!

  ♥Rosey&#...
03/05/08 (07:43 AM) 
You are most definitely correct! Hopeful thinkin indeed. I love the way you put this out there, glad you know we cannot actually change there ways but make them aware. Loved it.

  B. Rose
03/05/08 (03:58 AM) 
you right hopeful thinkin is right... well at least yor hoing for it.... and thats good that means God will bless you soon with him..

  STYLES C.
03/05/08 (02:28 AM) 
I don’t think we seek recognition…Everyone has some ish with them… It’s about settling down without reconceived notions …. Thinking that our differences span the ocean… It’s about the – work around solution…seeing as perfect doesn’t exist… Loved this drop mamma…I had to get that out or I would have responded … LOL

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