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"hope*wish*pray (love letter # 5)"
  by 11th Wonduh


((clarity pyramid w/ octameter haiku)


hope
cherish
contemplate

composed w/ love ballads
expressing soulful moods
reveals desires most intimate

"soulful introductionto love"


experience love w/t sun descending
passionately embraced
reprisal o/ love's sweet fantasies


pray
request
devotion

transform poetry
w/ sensuous balladry
deep feelings expressed in song

"invitation to (my soul's) openness"



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Date Submitted: Dec 03, 2008 (03:06 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 12/05/08 (09:51 PM)
Author: bbeauty
Poem Title: "".........EMBRACE.....

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  Bella Poetik
12/07/08 (11:37 PM) 
"experience love with the sun descending/passionately embraced/reprisal of love's sweet fantasies" *sighs* this was so beautiful Wonduh, i love how you can make me feel so many different feelings moving through your poetry- such a phenomena *soft smile sighing* this was enchanting poet...the music and background enhancing my experience that much more- so exquisitely sentimental

  bbeauty
12/05/08 (08:43 PM) 
CLASSY WRITE LUTHER VANDROSS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITES......AND THIS SONG IS ONE OF HIS BEST PIECES.........LOL........MY HEART IS POUNDING.....SMILES....I MIGHT HAVE A RESPONSE...STAY TUNE......B BLESS

  Arcane
12/03/08 (10:38 AM) 
"experience love w/t sun descending passionately embraced reprisal o/love's sweet fantasies pray request devotion"<<---that's true love.. and beautifully described..

  Tpoet
12/03/08 (07:40 AM) 
Beautiful

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