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"Hot Sex"
  by jaysin
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Desire by LateniteG






I see you and you see me
we start fucking Instantly
Not able to hold back our passion
Giving into each other without asking
You start sucking me, I start licking
Not sixty nine but just us two
I look in the mirror and you whisper I see you
Stuck in third person view
I am being controlled by you
you enhance the sensation by squeezing my head
Gagging as you go down choking as you go up
As I erupts giving you a close up close up
You can call me hard headed I can stay up
Slamming you down now its my turn
So I enter you on my terms
firmly grabbing you by your hips
looking in the mirror I see you licking your lips
Rubbing my finger on your clit
Have you saying
“OOOWW!!! that’s my spot nigga hit that shit”
Banging your back against the mirror
Making two look like four
you scream “MORE NIGGA MORE!!!!!!!!!”
not paying attention that we have slid
From the bed to the floor
You spread you legs so I can get deeper into your core
As You shout out “THERE YOU GO GIVE IT TO ME!!!!!”
pumping like a hydraulic brake
Kissing on you from your neck to your back
I lean back to watch your ass shake
Got me thinking to myself “how much more can she take”
Like a fish in a lake
I keep going further and further up your stream with each stroke
Trying to provoke an orgasm with each poke
you squirt off like a shook up bottle of coke
I look in the mirror and you are no longer awoke
But the smile remains from when you were woke
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Date Submitted: Jun 12, 2007 (12:51 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/26/07 (06:33 PM)
Author: shaybaby69
Poem Title: Supa Hot

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comment icon  COMMENTS (18)
  NewPoet
07/25/07 (11:21 PM) 
this was hot ch'yo...keep doin ur thing!

  Mr. Chicago Jo...
06/16/07 (05:28 PM) 
u fuck'n these young ladies heads up pimp...lol...nice wrtie boy

  ♀. Pro L...
06/16/07 (11:15 AM) 
Well goddamn!! I never saw this one coming ooooh you nasty lol This was a very wet read for me loved it

  kell
06/13/07 (06:34 PM) 
that's hot. You really set up the stage for the readers. Amazing how you took a scene and you put it into words that rhyme but at the same time make a point. ood job!

  Nilla
06/13/07 (03:01 AM) 
MmM MmM MmM. Gonna have the ladies screamin' for more with this joint, mayne... This joint in which you did it up so lovely! hah. Great write, boo.

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