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"HOT TUB LOVIN"
  by ladydiva46


It's friday night
just got off work
my body is sore

Feel like getting freaky

Who is the lucky man?

As i pick up the phone
the doorbell rings

I ask "who is it"
a deep sexy voice says
"it's tha scorpion baby"

I grin to myself
my pussy starts to
throb~~feels like
it has it's own hear beat

I open the door
and there he is
in black slacks
a white tee
and black alligator shoes

Come in i say

He steps in and
damn he smells good

We go the the livingroom
i get him a drink
we start chatting

He notices the patio door
is open
and the hot tub is running

"Did i interrupt something"

No~~as a matter of fact
i was just about to get
in

"Would u like to join me"?

We stripped down butt-ass
naked

Tha cool air hits
my nipples and
they instantly
get hard

I step into the tub
till the water is
at my waist

I feel him from behind
his manhood planted
between my buttocks

It was like we were magnets
stuck together

His hands roamed my body
as if i were being searched

His fingers found my honey pot
and he went in with both hands
and played with my clit

i could feel him as he slid his dick
up and down the crack of my ass

shit i was on fire
so i bent forward and
in slow motion he entered me
from behind

Damn that shit felt good
i rotated my ass in circles
very slowly

Bringing
the tip of his dick
almost out then back in

The bubbles in the tub
added to the excitement
i was feelin

Now i have to say baby got
gurth

Cause i was filled up from wall
to wall

My juices started eruptin
like a volcano

I was ready for sum of him
we exited the tub and
headed to the bedroom

I could not wait to taste him
he lay on his back lookin just
as sexy as ever

I started at his feet
licked my way up his thighs
played wit the balls

Now for the best part
i took his dick in my hands
and massaged the shaft very slowly

I could feel it throbbing
so i placed the tip in my mouth
and let my tongue dance circles
around it

He was biting his lips

I took half of his dick in my mouth
running my tongue up and down his
juicy stick

Now i had it completely in my mouth
first at a slow pace then i picked up
the pace, slowed down and continued
this pattern for about 30 minutes

I could feel that it was time for him to
erupt

I told him that i wanted him to spray it
all over me

So i lay down on the bed and just
in time it just gushed out all over
my face, my breasts it just kept
coming

As the last few drops fell i
grabbed his dick and gently sucked
the head

We got back in the tub and went another
round of doggystyle

We have made this day
hot tub luvin day

So every friday night
IT'S ME, THA SCORPION, AND THA HOT TUB
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Date Submitted: Mar 30, 2007 (12:50 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 03/31/07 (12:40 AM)
Author: Tha Scorpion
Poem Title: 100,000 feet a luv'n

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comment icon  COMMENTS (14)
  TheArtist07
06/08/07 (02:06 PM) 
hot and sexy and just straight fiyah of erotica..depth of your work in your penn'd visual..great piece of work

  sexxy brown su...
04/20/07 (04:05 PM) 
It sound like you got alot of woman envy of you with the hot tub lovin-lol, it be something you never forget. You got your freak on well, Scorpion, he best man for the job. Excellent write!

  jaysin
04/14/07 (10:44 AM) 
ok that was some serious freak shit i like it alot

  doe boi
04/05/07 (06:30 PM) 
DAMN DIVA YOU TURNT IT THE HEAT UP A LITTLE BIT WITH THIS DID'NT YOU? YOU REALLII DID YOUR THANG MA NO DOUBT AND THIS IS A HELLAFIED GANGSTA SEX TALE YA DIGGZ

  22dcentpoet
04/04/07 (12:09 PM) 
okay first of all my sister in service you probably left a lot of men reaching for the KY jelly and lotion and a great deal of women asking "WHY HER".. do we not admit that THA SCORPION is hot? This poem was sexually satisfying and satisfied like a ice cold glass of lemonade at the NCO club (LOL) I like this

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