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"House breaking a hound(P.E. Bustin that ass challenge)"
  by Group: Poetically Exposed
  - This Poem is a response to the poem House Breakin A Hound(P.E. Bustin that Ass challenge) by ButterflyDream


Lay you down,tie you up...let you sample a whiff
69 position just out of your reach,as down my welcoming throat your shaft slips
My ocean drowing your ship,feeling the continual crash of warm waves
Doling out potent, tongue lashings to my submissive,sexual slave
Slowly, teasing your cravings to go so deep
Stance quickly disolving,feel your cockiness getting weak
Loving how I please you..
but spartan instincts telling you to control and murder this from the back
Understand that Im the erotic queen and its you my warrior thats under attack
See Im running this show,setting the tone how things flow
Dictating to that dick when and just how hard to grow
While giving you an open wide veiw,of my pink,confection walls and delicous clit
Puddles on your stomach,leaking from my juicy slit
Desire on your lips,licking them like youre summoning a taste
Making you beg for this pussy...satisfaction isnt given in haste
Ease you in so you wont have a heart attack
Wouldnt want you to O.D. like youve just swallowed crack
My pussy's like Goldilocks to a dick,not to loose,not to tight
Snug like a glove that molds just right
And the site....mmm...such a beautiful thing
Pink,juicy plumpness,covered with cream
The most delicious,tantalizing peach that you"ll ever lust to bite
Feed it to you three times a day,morning,noon and night
Make you stir it firmly with your tongue as my nutrients your throat sips
Hittin you off with that grade A creaminess...because every growing boy needs his milk
Have you whipped...my obedient little hound
Cock standing at attention,invisbily choked and bound
Begging to be walked,tail between your legs and mouth carrying your leash
Feenin to devour these delicious,doggy treats


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Date Submitted: Nov 05, 2009 (05:16 AM)
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  s0uth3rn g1rl
11/05/09 (04:55 PM) 
Hats off to you Miss Ma'am, you did you thang in this piece!! I would quote you on something, but the whole damn piece was fire! Bravo!!

  leethal
11/05/09 (11:57 AM) 
this scribe was sooo sexy! "Make you stir it firmly with your tongue as my nutrients your throat sips" Hittin you off with that grade A creaminess...because every growing boy needs his milk" that drop right there was so nice, but i cuda quoted the entire last portion of this piece bcuz u brought that fyah!

  HOUND79
11/05/09 (10:10 AM) 
Why you do me like that LOL "My pussy's like Goldilocks to a dick,not to loose,not to tight Snug like a glove that molds just right" Best line I've heard in a while. OMG OMG... I got to dig deep to respond to this attack.

  Dana Dane... M...
11/05/09 (09:59 AM) 
Girl.... i could see you in a PE Queen stance over his sprung ass tryin to catch his breath! Woooo you went so hard... without even breaking a sweat.... im bowing to you right now! "My pussy's like Goldilocks to a dick,not to loose,not to tight Snug like a glove that molds just right".... "Hittin you off with that grade A creaminess...because every growing boy needs his milk"... fave lines right there. When i heard the 1st note of the song... i was like "thas my Girl!!!"

  Maxine
11/05/09 (08:45 AM) 
YEEEESSS!!! *standing O* I love this!! Sexy and dominate all in the same ink stroke!!! eloquent erotic Perfection... Dawn I am loving how PE ladies are taking those Spartans down.... so many fave lines but the stanza that got me was ------ "Ease you in so you wont have a heart attack Wouldnt want you to O.D. like youve just swallowed crack My pussy's like Goldilocks to a dick,not to loose,not to tight Snug like a glove that molds just right " ------------- simply Marvelous!!!

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