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"How Can I?"
  by Dimplez
  - This Poem is a response to the poem So you Lie by W_J_lyriC


You look me directly in the eyes,
and like a snake\'s venom,
poison me again with your lies.
You\'re not ready for a relationship,
you need time alone,
you have too many problems,
you\'re better off on your own.
You love me but...
too much is going on,
I\'m tired of hearing
your sorrowful song.
Yeah, some things you say are tear jerkers
but I refuse to cry over you
that well dried up
the last time you said you were through.
Now you want to be my friend,
you said you can\'t live without me.
But just a few days ago,
you hated everything about me.
You\'re so hypocritical,
sometimes I think you were born to lie,
because when the truth tries to come out,
a lie just passes it by.
How can I love someone who can\'t be true,
will I ever be able to trust you?
Friends are there for comfort,
but every time I try,
I just end up asking myself,
how can I ever gain comfort in a friendship
that was built upon lies.
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Date Submitted: Oct 21, 2009 (09:34 PM)
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  Luscious_atrup...
10/29/09 (09:13 AM) 
Bravo! I really loved this piece, the flow of words were put together very well. I can feel this piece, I have been here before. So i know what you mean. Thanks for this! Great job

  Honest
10/28/09 (05:13 PM) 
This is close to my life right at this moment! love it

  ButterflyDream
10/26/09 (11:50 AM) 
I loved the line\"friends are there for comfort\" that line just really pierced straight through me.Also\"how can I ever gain comfort in a friendship that was built upon lies\"such a simple question,but at times one that we dont ask ourselves before pouring in so much of our devotion*sigh*I feel this Dimp,niely done.

  dontsaymacbeth
10/22/09 (12:51 AM) 
get it girl. damn this is good. my fave line is \"sometimes i think you were born to lie\". that\'s harsh yet awesome. you are my inspiration, girl. keep it up!

  Athena317
10/21/09 (09:54 PM) 
amen... all those damn lies... who would sign up for that shit! lololol you betta not!!!

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