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"How Can I {To My Wife}"
  by A.J. Rhymez


Oh MY God..What have you done dear Lord!


How can I say I love you without using the same normal words that I often use
How can I prove my full affection and feelings that I have towrd you
How Can I say to you that you are my one and only true love
Without using the line "You were sent from heaven above"
How could I come up with the perfect write to express these thoughts in my mind
I guess the only safe way would be to take my time
So as I take my time
To create these linez
From the thoughts in my mind
I would like to take this time
And say, That since you are mine
Forever till the end of time

I Love You............
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Date Submitted: May 05, 2008 (05:23 PM)
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  glammagirl
10/02/08 (10:32 AM) 
this is a very beautiful i like the way you worded the poem and the way the lines kind of flow together.....10 starz

  ShezsFrsh_Y@D!...
09/12/08 (07:53 AM) 
Beautifully written, i cant say no more other than how better could u explain and use ur writing gift to show and tell how much u love one!

  ButterflyDream
09/09/08 (02:26 PM) 
A beautiful heartfelt write.I really like this words always feel so insificent when trying to express ur feelings to the person you love

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