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"How could he?"
  by Planted Daisies


How could he…?
P.W.A.G. Song Challenge

How could he?
Walked in to our home
And in an instance
You made my life I N C O M P L E T E

How could he?
Turn my world upside down
And tore my heart so fast

Making my hopes and dreams
Of a happily ever after
Just a thing of the past

Shattering away
All that made me
Happy

Being so cold to me
When I gave him everything
From deep inside my soul

Removing from me my pleasure
My love and joy
And replace it with pain
And misery
Making my life
Feel insignificant

Please help me understand

Cause I am lost without him

How could
The one I gave my heart to
Come and wreck this heart of mine

How could he
Come and say I love you yesterday
And today say the things he said
Breaking this heart of mine

Leaving me with this misery
That eats me up inside
Closed off with no where to go
With this inconsolable feeling
Completely lost

Can someone help me understand?
So I can find a way to heal
Now that he is not with me

How could he?

Planted Daisies2009
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Date Submitted: Nov 07, 2009 (10:42 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  MR. BYRD
11/08/09 (07:27 AM) 
Again, always pouring out those very strong emotions for the viewers to see...I love this piece...keep it up..continue to push that pen

  The Clinician
11/07/09 (11:02 PM) 
Always a kindrid spirit with such succulent prose. I never get tired of reading your scribes poetess.

  TRUE_KRAZE
11/07/09 (10:52 PM) 
I REALLY FELT YOUR EMOTIONS FLOWWING IN THIS....WORD BY WORD....I LIKE...KEEP UP THE GREAT WORK

  Cornfed
11/07/09 (10:46 PM) 
How could he? Damn but he didn't do it again!!!! Cool ink here! Your flow in the thought and concept rock Lady!

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