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"how dare you, how dare i?"
  by Crazy Baby


how dare you
how dare I
you said you wouldn't
but you still lie

how could you
destroy me like that
theres no chance
for you to turn back

them little hands
on that clock
you promised you wouldn't
but you still forgot

two tears you cried
in your red hot pain
the guilt i felt
and dirty shame

blame the man
above our heads
as he lets
our loved ones rest

and blame the devil
below our feet
your hearts still strong
but mine is weak

shattered glass
i walk upon
a trail of blood
where i came from

and howls and cries
in the night
when all is still
but nothing is right

no more i say
no more i can take
the dreams i see
while im awake

and you can't bare it
so you won't look
your addiction
and its hanging hook

so how could you
how could i
revenge is sweet
then you die

the world spins
to make it clearer
to the person I hate
in the mirror
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Date Submitted: Oct 15, 2007 (07:45 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (5)
  Jez
10/18/07 (02:38 AM) 
love the twist in the last phrase. Nice to have you writing again.

  Aleks
10/17/07 (09:04 AM) 
:) This piece Im definately am feeling it. gosh. This was really good!!! What else can I say, I know how you feel girl..........I know all too much:(

  mykah
10/17/07 (04:35 AM) 
wow. i dont even know what to say to that...way over my head.

  carie
10/16/07 (10:30 AM) 
dat was to good

  Star55
10/16/07 (05:33 AM) 
Oh my word. That last stanza had shivers running up my spine. This is one brilliant poem, CB. You leave me hanging for more each time! Simply brilliant

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