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"HOW DID YOU GET SO SWEET"
  by SLICK50


THE OTHER DAY I WAS IN THE CANDY STORE AND I OVER HEARD STRAWBERRY SHORT CAKE,LITTLE DEBBIE,SARA LEE AND BETTY CROCKER ALL TALKING BAD ABOUT YOU BUT I UNDERSTAND THEY ALL JUST JELIOUS BECAUSE THEY'LL NEVER BUT AS SWEET AS YOU THEY KNOW YOUR LIP GLOSS BE POPPIN AND YOUR KISSES ARE AS SWEET AS HONEYDEW THEY WHY EVERY TIME YOU WALK PASS THE BAKERY ALL THE MUFFIN MEN CREAM ON THEY LEMON PIES AND I CAN'T GET MAD AT THEM BECAUSE EVEN I OFTEN DAY DREAM ABOUT YOU AND ME MAKING LOVE UNDER A BLUEBERRY CHOCOLATE CHERRY COVERED TREE ON A BROWN SUGAR SAND BEACH BY A CREAM SODA SEA IN A PANCAKE SYRUP RAIN IT REALLY DON'T MATTER AS LONG AS YOU NEXT TO ME SO I CAN ASK HOW DID YOU GET SO SWEET

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Date Submitted: Jun 08, 2007 (04:28 PM)
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  LostGurl
06/15/07 (05:59 PM) 
I'm really lovin this one. The words really set it off and paint the scene for this one. Nice write

  Ciara
06/13/07 (01:08 PM) 
Thats hott daddy.... i love it...

  Davida S
06/09/07 (01:19 PM) 
this is so creative! 10 starz!

  deandrea
06/09/07 (12:35 PM) 
very creative... i didnt know someone could come up with all those sweets, lol kinda gave me a stomach ache lol.. but i love the write are you are extremely talented to come up with something like this... I'm feelin yout style boo, you get ten starzzzzzzzzz

  Browngrl86
06/09/07 (11:27 AM) 
This is sooo sweet! LOL wordplay on dis on is tight!

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