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"How?"
  by budderflibecks


How can I ease the pain?
Release the stressful strain?
Of these emotions that pull and tear me
Oh God, Lord, Jesus, Father
Please help me break free

I know I started all of this… and now,
My soul hangs by a thread over a kiss
Trapped in the ducts of insanities abyss
My lucid and uncluttered mindset I miss
No matter how I try, thoughts of you just persist
I pray on that someday it's you that I’ll be able to resist
But for now all I have is this… Restlessness
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Date Submitted: Jun 27, 2007 (10:30 AM)
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  mishel
07/05/07 (09:24 PM) 
wow ma, dis was deep and beautiful. i loved dis. ya word choice was perfect fo dis type a write. u got mad skillz ma. very good indeed. and a perfect 10 if i only i could rate this higher i promise u i would.

  C-note ron
07/04/07 (12:31 AM) 
Danm how do you do this the flow your flow is sick with, it's a flow that i cannot match even with the best of my thoughts and pen to a paper and a book with staplers i cannot equal this i cannot beat this

  SloFade
06/30/07 (04:26 PM) 
yup, Gurrlly took the words right outta my mouth. That restlessness is there to stay...(sadly) It eventually becomes a void, that someone else fills...and this hit me hard because I tend to ignore my void when it decides to show it's face again...

  Keibo
06/27/07 (10:07 PM) 
I couldn't tell you how many times I have felt like this...this simple, yet powerful write expresses it all: "My lucid and uncluttered mindset I miss..."...nicely stated....Very well done...

  Syndel
06/27/07 (10:38 AM) 
this is tight love the feel and the flow and been there done that keep doin you

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