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"HOW I LOOK AT LIFE.."
  by WEVY


HOW I LIKE AT LIFE I DONT NO IF EANY ONE ELSE UNDERSTANDS
I JUST WANT IT TO BE OVER IT,S TO HARD TRYING TO STAY OUT
OF TROUBLE TRYING TO PLEASE EVERY ONE AND MAKEING SURE MY MOM IS HAPPY.

TRYING TO BE ALL I CAN BE AND GET OUT OF SKOOL TRYING TO MAKE SURE I STAY OUT OF TROUBLE SO I WONT GO TO JAIL..

I LOOKING AT LIFE IN ALL DIFFERNT EYES I WANT TO NO HOW SOME ONE LAYS UP WITH SOME1 AND HAVE A BABY AND DONT WANT TO COME SEE IT OR TAKE CARE OF IT

I WANT TO NO HOW PEOPLE STEAL FROW THE BLIND AND ROB FROM THE POOR HOW U CAN KILL PEOPLE BECAUSE THEY LOOK AT U WRONG

HOW U CAN GO TO WAR AND FIGHT FOR SOME THING U DONT EVEN BEIVE IN KILL PEOPLE U DONT NO AND NOT FELL SORRY

HOW I LOOK AT LIFE IS SAD I JUST DONT NO HOW THIS WORLD.. MY LIFE CAME TO THIS IT USED TO BE SO EASY WEN I WAS YOUNG U DIDENT HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT NONTHING

BECAUSE MOM OR DAD DID IT FOR U NOW MOM MAKE U DO FOR U SELF AND U GET LOST DAD WAS NEVER THERE HE CALLED ONCE A YEAR WHEN YOU BIRTHDAY CAME AROUND OR U DID BAD IN SKOOL TO YELL AT U

BUT I DONT GET IT HOW COME U NEVER CAME TO SEE ME OR HOW U TEEL ME U LOVE ME AND U CANT EVEN RESPECT YOUR WIFE OR MY MOM..
HOW I LOOK AT LIFE IS I DONT EVEN LOOK I JUST TRY TO TAKE IT ONE DAY AT A TIME...
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Date Submitted: May 16, 2007 (09:00 AM)
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  Andrew84
06/07/07 (11:18 AM) 
very strong points in this one. I share the same sentiments. Ten stars, easy. thirteen if i could.

  **HOLLA**
06/06/07 (09:39 AM) 
AAAWWW, BEEN THERE AND DONE THAT, TAKE IT EASY LIL' MAMA, IF THINGS ARE BAD THEY CAN ONLY GET BETTER, JUST STAY FOCUSED AND YOU CAN ACCOMPLISH WHATEVER YOU WISH...

  MizzUnknown
05/23/07 (03:21 PM) 
this was real deep...ur words were nicely written...i love it!

  Truessence4u
05/23/07 (02:50 PM) 
loving this check out my poetry plz when u get a chance... ~1~

  tanquilla
05/17/07 (06:00 PM) 
girl i couldn't have said this any better..i feel everything you said ..i mean im tired and sometimes i feel as if im part pupet part human..because every1 feels they should have some kind of controll over MY dystiney..very nice..much love..peace

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