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"Humbly Educate Your Sanity"
  by D Benitez


Stay away from my door
Move away from my heart
Let me find myself
I’m torn apart.
Where can I begin to find the bits & pieces?
So lost within myself.
The pains too deep in
Searching for the reasons
This taste has lost its seasons
You won’t hear my sorrows
But inside I’m pleading.
To many emotions moving
Through my weak end
Branchless trees
Can’t climb up with no growth

Just need some time
And a little bit of help.
Just need some time
And a little bit of help.

A hug to hold tight
Love with all my might
With all my heart
Repenting the lost time spent
Bought disturbing memories
Haunting my sleep walking
Walked to my death
Lost my breathe
Many times on this quest
Freezing cold still can’t see
Air leaving me
Resurrect the blessed
Jealousy granted more time in hell
Threw away the chest that locked away
Not prepared for the escape
Of everything I couldn’t face

Just need more time
And a little bit of help
Just need more time
And a little bit of help

Turned around didn’t run away
Pierced times bolted & revolted
Every lie scolded and remolded
Listen to the folk tales
Tattle tell my darkest torment
Restructured accuracy
Factuality of deception’s reality
Rebuilt and awake I await
In the alley
At the end of this gallery
Displayed for all to speculate
The many obstacles
Given to take
As I reincarnate my faith
Give to myself with no limits

The last piece to this exhibit
Prevails a picture of me naked
And right beside me lay
A sliced up blanket.

I write
For
Myself
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Date Submitted: Oct 06, 2008 (02:35 PM)
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  Luvlee
10/29/08 (09:16 AM) 
oh my wow this definitely hit so far home with me i love when another writer can tell their story and it feels like mine!!! "I write for myself" <--yes how we all should but sadly we dont but glad that there is still writers out there that do so!!!loved it!<3Luv

  PoeticSoulja
10/25/08 (11:32 AM) 
The uniqueness of this poem exemplifies self expression in such a genuine way. You definitely earned another person who admires your writing prowess. This poem receives a ten star rating from me :) Good job poetess

  JustChuck
10/20/08 (07:15 PM) 
This reminded me of that Monica song back in the day. Everybody feels the need to vent and recollect themselves. I believe your really captured the spirit of this in this piece.

  cookedcoke02
10/14/08 (01:58 PM) 
WOWW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW WOW BEST POEM I EVER HAVE READ!!!! EVER! THIS IS CRAZIII! YOUR FLOW AND WORDAGE IS SO SINCERELY ON POINT! GRL!!!!!! WOW!!!!!!!!!!! GOT MY HEART RACING!!!!! "THIS TASTE HAS LOSTS ITS SEASONS" WOW I WOULD LIKE TO QUOTE THE WHOLE ENTIRE POEM WITHOUT WRITING IT OUT!!! FAVED! N U DESERVE THE WORLD N MORE N FOR THIS WRITE SHYT....WORDS CANNOT EXPRESS HOW GREAT IT WAS WRITTEN!!!! "JUST NEED MORE TIME-AND A LITTLE BIT OF HELP' IM HERE ALL DAA WAY THROUGH! LOVE U PRINCESS!!!...
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  dadreama
10/10/08 (09:31 AM) 
damn d , this is hott ! love itttttttt. like seriously. very powerful write. love this ->Turned around didn’t run away Pierced times bolted & revolted Every lie scolded and remolded Listen to the folk tales Tattle tell my darkest torment Restructured accuracy Factuality of deception’s reality Rebuilt and awake I await In the alley At the end of this gallery Displayed for all to speculate The many obstacles Given to take As I reincarnate my faith Give to myself wit...
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