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"Hungry"
  by Raxxie


Hungry eyes devour you every time
Hungry thoughts from an insatiable mind
Hungry desires rise & passions climb
Surging and ebbing with the tide

Thirsty lips crave a kiss
Only quenched by other thirsty lips
Thirsty body parched by this
To feel your hands on thirsty hips

Curious hands with curious ease
Curiously hold & squeeze
Driven by curious want & need
To curiously taunt & tease

Wandering hands & wandering eyes
Wondering what beneath lies
Wandering thoughts, in wondering minds
Time halts as temperatures rise

Satisfied fingers quiver
Satisfied that they could deliver
Satisfied at each responsive shiver
Satisfied to be a giver
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Date Submitted: Apr 08, 2009 (12:58 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 05/21/09 (10:55 PM)
Author: A.C.H.
Poem Title: Burning Desire

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  คว...
06/19/09 (09:19 AM) 
wow....this one is so different from other erotic pieces....very unique style and layout format...love the repeated word usage in each individual stanza....this was very teasing and very sexualy satisifying to read...such an excellent write!

  Sincere6026
06/10/09 (11:43 PM) 
This was sick!!! I loved it from beginning to end. When you say it out loud, it makes you wish that you wrote it personally. (smile) Great job! -Sincere aka Keisha

  MzFyne_N_Bless...
05/21/09 (11:57 PM) 
Awww...this is BEAUTIFUL!! Now this is by far the best structured write Ive ever written....I just LOVE the way you wrote your write. I mean its relatable but the way you worded it...its SO profound. I LOVE it!!! Ten starz and a fave.

  A.C.H.
05/19/09 (11:12 PM) 
You have satisfied my hunger for poetry with this piece! I do not think I have read a better poem than what I have read today, it was absolutely incredible. I want to do a poet response to this but I am definitely going to need some time before I can do a response to your poem justice. Much luv! - "the inspired one"

  jdubbya3
05/13/09 (03:12 AM) 
hmmm very nice... very nice indeed. i like how you did your word play... i like word play:) good write .. iam gonna check more of you out 10 n'ya

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