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"Hungry"
  by Shar


I’m hungry for you
For your love
For your attention
For your touch
Hungry for emotions
For soul bonding
For spiritual reconnection
For togetherness
I’m hungry for acceptance
For approval
Hungry for you to see me tearlessly crying out
“Please see me, take me away from aloneness, from self pity, from self hate”
Please Help Me
Show me how to be what you want me to be
Who you want me to be
Who you want me to perpetrate

Abandonment equals starvation

Please

Please

Now upon my knees I beg you like that of a homeless, motherless child whose belly is swollen from hunger
Face tear stained
Nose clogged and crusty
Ribs showing
Flies lingering

Abandonment equals starvation

Please feed me
Take me and adopt my soul
Remember pictures of my physical, when I was healthy full of love and togetherness?
And was rich and seemingly wealthy

Abandonment equals starvation

You eat and feed off of my self destruction
Caused by your lack of acceptation
Lack of dedication and that of mutual gratification
I fed you
Nursed you into the man you are today
You starved me into poverty and into non-existence
Holding a sign
“Will starve for love”
Love me
Please…plea…ple

Abandonment equals starvation


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Date Submitted: May 15, 2009 (08:22 AM)
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  Stoykes
05/24/09 (12:44 AM) 
awesome....wordplay is truly on point. abandonment = starvation....man this is so true!! i love the concept and depth of this write. i see your still going strong. ~Stoykes

  after vision
05/15/09 (06:50 PM) 
Please feed me Take me and adopt my soul -- wonderful - just wonderful

  CHEESEY BREAD
05/15/09 (11:45 AM) 
I do love you much very nice this really touched my heart .....10 and more

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