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"hurts without you"
  by boricuashorty617


baby shyt is so hard without u
neva in a million years did i think things wuld turn out dis way between us
neva imagined lovin u wuld hurt this bad
neva did i think u wuld b d 1 2 break mii heart
so many nites i waste cryin ova u
but i cant help remembering d past
remembarin how gud mii lyf use 2 b
reality hurts so bad
it hurts knowin shes gettin mii lyf mii world mii everythin
shes gettin mii kisses and hugs
evan gettin mii hits
i still remeba wen u said dose 3 words
*i love you*
wut happend 2 dat??
wut happend 2 "ill neva let u out of mii lyf no matta how bad u tried 2 leav"
wut happend baby??
y u hurt me so bad?
y u make me so sad?
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Date Submitted: Nov 23, 2008 (09:49 PM)
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  Yas
12/10/08 (08:16 PM) 
definitely felt the emotions in this and can honestly say I know exactly how you feel

  Wrighter
12/04/08 (09:12 PM) 
Damn I kknow it must be hard- but give it time- and remember as cliche as this may sound, everything happens for a reason. great write xoxo wrighter

  K-JiO
12/04/08 (08:25 PM) 
When love is young, new and fresh, people will say things because they feel so good ... fresh love is like that. You really should evaluate love after the first fight ... after seing him or her in not the best of circumstances. If you can still say I love you after that ... then it's all good. This was a nice write. Kep cre8'in

  YNNAiRA
11/30/08 (09:33 PM) 
im feeling this

  Mz.Sunshine
11/30/08 (08:47 PM) 
i can feel the emotions you put into it. writing how you felt will help to let go. 10 stars

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