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"hypnotized"
  by Speechless Image


hypnotized inside earth
to socialize with the devil.
focused mainly on -money and the levels that come with it.
steppin up with 2 sets of footprints
and a defense of heart and mind.
with man-made iron sometimes...to remind whats mines.
hypnotized to the street life
all hours for money and respect f*ck power.
aiming to simplify times and surroundings
multiply the funds...to supply more goods throughout the hood.
funny thing how things be.
hometown heat in the streets
keep disbelief of someday stability
killin me literally to really be seriously hypnotized...
blinded somewhat....as to what's really important...
if anything....
gut feeling that sh*t dont matter.
especially when the gun rattle and scatter out....splattering targets
and shattering dreams
however things may be. its always a nightmare in the way of your dreams
so i just awaken and fake it like i made it
but the reality is um still hypnotized

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Date Submitted: Nov 12, 2008 (07:43 PM)
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  Str8teazer201
11/12/08 (10:58 PM) 
you must recognize sometimes things arent as bad as they mey seem .. bluz when u have no shoes there is a person with no feet ... there is always sumbodi suffering worse then you ... so keep ur head up

  Antwyne
11/12/08 (10:45 PM) 
this was a great piece....it keeped me focused on the words and the message...ten starz**********

  sexy.beautiful...
11/12/08 (10:14 PM) 
this was a deep and emotional piece that u have written...straight to the point and a fav of mine keep flowing

  harley quinn/a...
11/12/08 (07:53 PM) 
now speech you silly if ya think i'm not gonna rate ya ass .... i loved it ... it was tight ... ya know my darkly woven self does even tho ya won't speak to my ass ....

  cybersamm
11/12/08 (07:52 PM) 
no matter what it may seem to be its mostly not....its going thru a process we all as humans go thru motions..its growth...and dont let defeat crush anything you dream....tell the devil he has bad breath n offer him some mouth wash,,cuzz gosh anything you feel off him is bullshit...peace love.

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