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"HYPOTHETICALLY SPEAKING..."
  by MAVRICK


Would you wish on a falling star
On a collision course with Earth, and you asked for a car
Would you smile if you had a wet dream
Then woke up in the dry desert,
with a pocket full of gold and a mouth full of parched screams
If you always asked and expected me to always give
When I finally said No...
Would you hate me, berate me and wished I'd die instead of live
If I told you my truth, in written symbols that formed words
Then added hidden lessons, through metaphoric sentences and esoteric verbs
Gave you a key to unlock doors to mental trees
Would you gladly accept them? It's All I Have To Set Us Free...
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Date Submitted: Aug 14, 2009 (01:03 AM)
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  Ordained2Chang...
09/04/09 (11:28 AM) 
Hypothetical and abstract thoughts are what make you, you... whether humorous or not... They still still all come together to make masterpieces

  *Jazique*
08/19/09 (01:31 AM) 
Mann, I really love this...I think we ask ourselves these questions everyday...It's like if I told you the honest truth...how would you react? how would you act towards me now...Anyways your style is amazing...I like!

  *Miss Toya*
08/15/09 (11:05 AM) 
okay i'll be fav'ing this one but "Would you smile if you had a wet dream Then woke up in the dry desert, with a pocket full of gold and a mouth full of parched screams " lol! you be on some other shit...

  Cornfed
08/14/09 (07:02 PM) 
Words to remember to forget ! So one can read them again for such joy!

  piss a mofo of...
08/14/09 (05:43 PM) 
Bro i was just having hypotheticals too the other night like...girl if i told you, you was fat 'hypothetically' would you be mad at me, or if i told you that i wouldn't kiss you cause 'hypothetically' yo breath stank would you hate me....LMMFAO....see i deal in hypotheticals too...that's that Bro connection!

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