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"I ACCEPT (THE GIFT OF YOU)"
  by K.A.S. THE LYRICAL GANGSTER
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Giving You...me by Raw Sensuality!



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Love in its Raw.est Sensuality
giving me you totally
accepting me as I am unconditionally
you make it possible for………..
no more grey hanging overhead high
just warm blue sky
promising a bright forecast for you and i
The vision of my heart blurred no more
letting your love blow away clouds
that overcast my fears of your affection
I see clearly now a rainbow of devotion with colors
that represent the hues of your loyal dedication
our souls dance with a glow of happiness wrapped around them

no longer confused about the meaning of you loving me
sharing a world together to make life complete
enhancing our minds with something we can feel
two hearts synchronized to the same rhythm
something fascinating and concrete
the pure adoration of commitment that is given

I stand bare before you like a new born baby
needing you like it needs first breath
wearing nothing but naked honesty
I want to inhale you like air
willing to give my all till nothing’s left

no false pretences being concealed
I want us to be like a poet’s perfect poem of love
I want to be the reason you live
I want to sustain you like water quenches thirst
take a drink of me
let me appease your heart

for you my eyes are totally open
clairvoyant with you at my side
I can see a wonderful future
loving you in the present
body, mind and soul eternally
our love so strong we become each others past
infinity will smile upon and bless us…….
having found stability in the others imperfections.......
we were meant to last
so I accept the gift of you forever





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Date Submitted: Sep 10, 2009 (02:02 AM)
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  *Miss Toya*
09/10/09 (11:02 AM) 
Beautifully written...my fav part was " I stand bare before you like a new born baby needing you like it needs first breath wearing nothing but naked honesty I want to inhale you like air " no one pens love like you :)

  Athena317
09/10/09 (09:51 AM) 
each of these stanzas could stand alone... this piece was intoxicating.. I just LOVE to see unconditional love penned to perfection like this!

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