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"I agree"
  by drmbabyboy
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I GOTTA HAVE MY SPACE.... by DOMINICANPOET


I remember a time when we were friends.
Back then we grew and now we bend.
It's funny when you paper thin.
Your thoughts roll out from pad to pen.
It never makes sense relationships.
I recall how you used to lick your lips.
When things were funny you clapped so hard.
When things were bad you walked the yard.
You needed space and I neglected that.
We've come too far to accept a setback.
LEt's overthrow that and begin again.
You need your space then take my hand.
And walk me through where you need to go.
I'm only human but still I know.
The difference between the heart and soul.
Our thoughts and goals ran in a line.
Now love ain't solid and time's not kind.
I'm sorry for taking your peace of mind.
But we've come too far to look behind.
Please sign the agreement and forgive what I've done.
It's not fun being lonely, and two's better than one.
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Date Submitted: Apr 08, 2008 (05:05 PM)
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  **HOLLA**
04/08/08 (06:04 PM) 
AAAWWW, look who I came a cross, a old friend... what's good papi, nice response, like hers, mellow, soft, calm, and understanding, I like this...

  DOMINICANPOET
04/08/08 (05:48 PM) 
damn ten starsss from ya gurl without a doubt im really feelin this keep it up

  lady innocent
04/08/08 (05:08 PM) 
I FELT YAH A TEN KEEP IT UP ALRIGHT

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