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"I Am but A Statistic(Male Version)"
  by Mr. DID


Its for me to say that I am an African American MALE
One that is not being chased by the law, one that is not up for sale
I am but what society make me to be
No I'm not all doom and gloom, I don't have the stare of dishonesty
You can't look at me and say " Thats another black man ready to be put in jail"
Sitting there stare-crazed with no one to pay my bail
I can clearly say I am but a statistic
I am one of the few that thinks realistic
I am not any drug addicted man on the streets
Who is yet striving to stay up beat
Not one society has to keep a watch on because of anothers doing
Not another ghetto person in the banking yelling, being picky and choosey
I refuse to be yet another face to face with a judge because of a gun charge
Or one that sell stuff illegal from his garage
One that is listed dead becuase of a gang related incident
One the died drinking and driving because of an automobile accident
Yet another one with problems in a single parent home
Another that is an outcase facing the world alone
I am but another stastic
One of the choosen few that thinks realistic
I refuse to let another piece of paper that another wrote determine my future
To print my face and my diolouge "Put em' up or I'll shot ya"
Society will NOT be my downfall in this thing we call life
They pressure me with nothing but pain, gulit and strife
I wil be one of the few that raises the bar above the rim
I will let my light shine bright like the North Star and never let it go dim
I will grow up to be the best that I can be instead of going balistic
Because I am but another statistic
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Date Submitted: Dec 07, 2007 (12:19 PM)
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  NINO
12/08/07 (10:39 PM) 
Hey, this is real positive man. I like da outlook dat u have in this write. All you gotta do is stay positive and keep God 1st and everything will be fine in the end. Excellent job, homie. Gotta give ya 10 starz out the gate.

  poet skylove b...
12/08/07 (07:26 PM) 
wow 10 stars that was very positive , you go boy do your damn thing!!!!!!!!!and let your light shine bright

  Eryn
12/08/07 (07:13 PM) 
Again i must say this is a nice voice 4 tha yung black youth. especially 4 tha male society! 10 starz

  Lil' Shadow
12/08/07 (07:10 PM) 
like i said this is great brother keep doing it 10 star

  *Tha Scorpion*
12/08/07 (07:10 PM) 
Nice outlook you have young fella, I agree wit 11th W, there is always some lookin' to knock you down, from within' and outside of our race. Keep positive, keep striving for your goals and most importantly keep GOD 1st and watch all ya enemies fall.

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