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"I am “Untitled”"
  by Lani


I am untitled
With no words to call my own
I am used
To far away from home

I was beautiful
Till I made all my mistakes
I could smile
Even if it was fake

I an untitled
Please don’t call me yours
You still judge me
And all of my flaws

I can’t cry
But I don’t mind at all
It still hurts
That from so high that I fall

I am untitled
Won’t you still hold me?
I’m not blind
But your love I can’t see

I’m not loved
But I make it through the day
I am speechless
Without a word to say
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Date Submitted: Feb 26, 2007 (08:53 PM)
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  Yas
01/20/08 (04:14 PM) 
I like this great write you got sum real talent

  tenayathebread
03/27/07 (07:04 PM) 
hella good

  MizzBrandon
03/15/07 (10:51 PM) 
do you still believe you "were" beautiful, or that you "are" beautiful?

  mykah
03/15/07 (12:10 AM) 
ive said it before, but i just love this one!

  professorpoet
03/14/07 (04:58 PM) 
Im really into this poem! its really good!

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