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"I Am, You Were Blind"
  by KiNg-Go0B3r
  - This Poem is a response to the poem You're Not the One by Jalay


i was the one, but you couldnt see it
that someone whos special, i wanna be it
i wanna be him, and you are the reason
that im jonesin in these proses, this time, ill freeze it




stuck here with you, i can feel you breathin
i hear you screamin, your tears are blinkin, theyre surprised to see me
wasnt expected so early, im a lie, it seems it
but i am the truth, wont you let me be it?
i tried to treat you good, wouldnt let me achieve it




i wrote you a letter and im hopin you read it
read it, dont react from ya anger and tare it
that tares it, youve had it with me and cant bare it
askin me to leave, broke ya heart, cant repair it




we used to be a pair, now im chillin with the lonelist number
we talk about problems, and our lack of slumber
i look back and wonder, why i loved that woman
and i think about her smile, must be nice or somethin
its like ice in summer, it makes me melt in the moments
that i would think about us havin a child, and you the mother
reluctantly i pass the torch to the other
you can have what you want from her



used to be the one, so you can be second
but dont lose her, i did, she use to be my blessin.....
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Date Submitted: Oct 25, 2009 (04:55 PM)
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  dagirl2fly4hat...
10/26/09 (09:33 PM) 
I like ur flow n this poem keep it up

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