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".:::I await your Greatness:::."
  by LyricalDiva


You insist on
Making a difference

But your faint melodic words
Contained and trapped
Within the electronic pages
Of this screen
Fall on deaf ears


Do you humbling scribe
Mental pictures of inspiration
…………..Only to remain hidden
……….. And forgotten?

Do these words derived from the heart,
Transcribe into your every day lives
Remain as lost mixed message?

Do you tempt fate?
Do you try to penetrate
Or try to affect a nation?

Its time that you stand
Devour the words that you create
Within your impertinent mind
Without hesitation
Because ignorance
Is not an option


I await your Greatness….


Do your actions
Speak louder than the words
You so carefully pen out?

As we face a world full of phonys
…………………..And fakeness

In a time when
Cruelness resembles
Trueness

Blindness is on the rise
When too many people
Are walking around
Aimless and spineless

And heartlessness is
Spreading like an infection

And children our growing up
Without a parents affections



We must let our words transpire
Into our minds and souls
And stop preaching to the choir
And get out there and make a difference


I await your raise to Greatness….

♥♥LyricalDiva
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Date Submitted: Sep 02, 2009 (12:54 PM)
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  Blayzn 10
09/06/09 (03:42 PM) 
"Do these words derived from the heart, Transcribe into your every day lives Remain as lost mixed message? " super emotional piece. That is a super feeling when you finally find that greatness!!

  Stormy_b
09/04/09 (10:39 AM) 
This piece flowed so well loving your work

  mzembe
09/03/09 (06:57 AM) 
u flow like a pro and strong message

  Advocate
09/02/09 (10:21 PM) 
motivational to say the least. i know this is not, but it feel so directed towards me. i have had those moments where feelings of greatness were felt. yet her i stand, almost in the same place of past. this has a revolutionary feel. arise and command the attention so desired. words are powerful, actions inspired from those worse are unstoppable. impressive. amazing. in my own way, this opens eyes and i'm glad those eyes opened to this. wonderful work.

  glo
09/02/09 (04:28 PM) 
i love this to because it just remind me that God works through us not for us , so until you go out there and make things happen and stand for what you believe in and speak about , it not going to knock on your door and get you, to break records you have to break rules, "Do you actions , speak louder than the words, you so carefully pen out" if you talk about it then be about it , i love that 10 stars amazing

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