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"I CAME"
  by LAB **Ms. Cool Whip**


I came 11.14.08

I came here to find a name for myself
learn myself
recreate myself
just being myself

By taking an instance in time
Replaying it through scripted
Remembrances
To look back at things and beings
That I’ve done and seen
To see how much time I put into me

I came to a place of ‘equality???’

I came to be able to speak my mind
Well scripted or rhymed
Rants, bullshit topics, and facts
All of that
A place to let stress remove
Through keyboard taps

The only person concerning me
Was me,
She’s the only one I wanted to get at
All three of me… lol

Sensitive Lety, crazy LAB, and angry T

I came to find ‘peace’

I came as a therapy,
To meet others to inspire me
To teach not take from me
To be able to speak
Briefly
Through a computerized sheet

I came to get away

Without having to catch a case
Without having to break or save face
Can yall feel me in this place??

Yo is this mike on??

*tap, tap*
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Date Submitted: Nov 17, 2008 (08:02 AM)
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  Isis sun
11/18/08 (03:04 PM) 
*puting hands together and applauding* you got that right..this is exactly how you should come at it...breathe it out, take it in..instant fav.

  Ms. Sincerious
11/18/08 (10:59 AM) 
" came to be able to speak my mind Well scripted or rhymed Rants, bullshit topics, and facts All of that A place to let stress remove Through keyboard taps ".. you and I both hon.. notice: nowehere in there did it say : ICAME FOR THE BULLSHIT.. lol.. you spoke my mind on this one.. Im so glad you came back.. period.

  H.H. Holloway
11/17/08 (09:02 PM) 
So basically--You Came--You Saw--You Conquered! Bravo!

  *Miss Toya*
11/17/08 (10:31 AM) 
"I came to get away Without having to catch a case" word...and...i'm always saying..."is this thing on....this is a fav...

  piss a mofo of...
11/17/08 (10:10 AM) 
*SIGHS*....THAT BACKDROP IS SO BREATHTAKING...I LOVE JUST THE BEAUTY OF THE BROWN QUEEN AND THE SCRIBE SCRIBED FROM THIS MUSE WAS INCREDIBLE..."I came to be able to speak my mind Well scripted or rhymed Rants, bullshit topics, and facts All of that A place to let stress remove Through keyboard taps.."...<----HOTT SHIT!!!...You had me entranced with this entire thing...shall we have breakfast?

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