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"...I Can Give You Tonight..."
  by *Miss Toya*
  - This Poem is a response to the poem give me tonight - for love by after vision


Love...
.
.
.
I can give you tonight...
.
But I want to give you...
So much more...
.
You'll need more...
Than just one night...
.
To stroke the commitment...
Within my core...
.
It'll take more...
.
Then one night of love making ...
To make love...
To me for one night...
.
I can give you that...
But i'd rather...
Give you love...
For the rest of my life....
.
.
.
Your brand new heart....
Is so pure...
.
And this heart of mine...
Has endured...
.
So much
.
And just one...
Love laced night
Won't be enough...
.
.
.
Can you love me...
.
Unconditionally...
.
With not one string...
.
Attached???...
.
.
.
Can you love me...
.
The way you want to...
.
And prove your love...
.
Is unmatched???...
.
.
In one night???
.
.
.
I want you to love me...
And never leave my side...
.
I can give you tonight...
.
But I'd much rather...
Give you a lifetime...
.
.
.

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Date Submitted: Oct 27, 2009 (12:02 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 10/30/09 (08:49 AM)
Author: K.A.S. THE LYRICAL G...
Poem Title: IF YOU GIVE ME ONE N...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (23)
  KSMOVE
11/10/09 (02:07 PM) 
Bravo!!! u the truth keep spilling

  Athena317
10/30/09 (09:39 AM) 
this is like turnin the corner from just kickin it to something much more meaningful! Bravo mami!

  K.A.S. THE LYR...
10/30/09 (08:24 AM) 
this is some poetry about love .....ifeel you on this piece..."In one night??? . . . I want you to love me... And never leave my side... . I can give you tonight... . But I'd much rather... Give you a lifetime..."....very real and nicely written

  BrEeZyWrOtE
10/29/09 (02:38 PM) 
This so incredibly beautiful. Any guy would be crazy not to feel this. The honesty and vulnerability in it captures the entire poem.

  MAVRICK
10/29/09 (02:33 PM) 
MMMmmmm... a lifetime...(why do i get visions of a judge slamming the mallot down screaming...LIFE!)..hahaha...well I guess it wont be that bad depending on who im serving..haha...you always kill these love writes with sincere emotion and heart-felt content...

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