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"I CAN SEE"
  by precious225


IN MY EYES I CAN SEE
THAT YOU ARE REALLY FEELING ME
JUST TO LET YOU KNOW BOUT ME
I AM WISE THAN THEE

BEYOND MY YEARS I CAME CLOSE
CLOSE TO FIND YOU
YOU ARE LIKE A DOSE
AND LIKE A WITHCES BREW
YOU DREW ME NEAR YOU

I CAN SEE US TOGETHER
FLYING LIKE A FEATHER
IN TH SKY WE MY RISE
BUT WE RISE TOGETHER

YOU CAN SAY I'M FEELING YOU TOO
SO LETS DO WHAT WE DO
I'M THROUGH WITH THE GAMES
I'M READY TO BE TAMED

BOY I CAN SEE
THAT I NEED YOU CLOSE TO ME
I DON'T WANT TO FIGHT
I DON'T WANT TO ARGUE

I JUST WANT YOU TO LOVE ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Date Submitted: Nov 17, 2009 (09:41 AM)
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  KINGLO
12/13/09 (11:12 PM) 
feeeling it

  ghettoholidai9...
12/09/09 (10:01 AM) 
ok im feelin you you metaphors goin hard and i lik the format of it nice writw indeed

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