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"I Cheated"
  by Poetic Lyricist
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I Found Out by big josh


I cheated.........
Because for once I felt wanted and needed
I was taken away
Because I was vulnerable
And he knew just what to say
So I didn’t argue
I was emotional
And I can’t blame it on alcohol
Because I was sober
I cheated and that’s all to it
I wanted to be needed and he knew it

I cheated.........
Because someone noticed me
He was being pleasing and his focus was me
I was only supposed to tease him
But affection is was what he showed me
He kissed me.....Then he said things that you never told me
I gave in because for a moment I wanted to be happy
I gave in because I thought that I owed it to me

I cheated.........
Because you didn’t want to be bothered with me
You treated me like nothing and didn’t honor me
You forgot about my birthday
You hurt me in the worst way
And you ignored me on Valentine’s Day
You put everything before me
And didn’t treat me like a lady
You couldn’t even look me in the face
Little did I know....
Someone else was waiting to take your place
And he made me feel wanted – He made me feel safe

I cheated.........
Because you didn’t listen to me
You didn’t pay attention to me
You made me feel unworthy
You acted as if you didn’t care
You didn’t even notice I’ve changed my hair
I needed somebody to keep my warm
But you were always gone and never there
I cheated........ But you should have been into me
Like I was into you
I cheated - But I didn’t mean to hurt you

I cheated - Because I didn’t like the silent treatment
I cheated - Because I felt resented and offended
I cheated because I felt as if I was being cheated
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Date Submitted: Jul 17, 2009 (01:11 PM)
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  Elicit
09/01/09 (02:21 PM) 
wow so wow dont approve of cheating but why didnt you just leave him if he was treqating you so badley

  LatrinaThePoet
08/23/09 (09:28 AM) 
That really took my mind to another status foreall.. loved it.. instant fav!

  Jj
08/11/09 (06:17 PM) 
THis is deep, I had to fav this one, I feel like I am playing double dutch, bobbin and weaving with this piece, beautiful scribe.10 ++++

  DEEP THOUGHT
08/11/09 (12:08 PM) 
wooooooooowwwwwwwww 10

  big josh
08/07/09 (01:40 PM) 
damn this was a nice response, I like the depth of it

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