Love you more than god
Loved man
Loved his son
…
Understand
…
Love you for uninterrupted
Visions of love
That grows till it becomes bigger than man
The canyon grand
Swear I could fill it with love
Paramour
We are the paradigm
To the notion that true love
Still exists
…
Love is this
Saturdays and Sundays
After Fridays and before Mondays
The space between
Where a king and queen forget
That love is greater than…
Rivers of strawberries
And oceans of honey
I love you
Mimic the wind
Travel this billet-doux
Deep within your soul
Amidst the chimes and bells
Because love is still chivalrous
Do not… fall out of this love spell
…
Loving you is …
Set sailing
On celestial cirrus clouds
Into the kingdom
Of loving true…loving you
Aloud
Bend time … refract light
To show you
More beautiful space and time
In my mind
Because you make me love you
With repetition…and admission
Combustible material
I love you
Virally … serial …
And this record skips faithfully
Loving you sacredly
…
Set free
…
You are… love
And love is what I declare…repetitively
Love is still chivalrous??? lmao... (just messing with you...) A lot of times good poets inject great imagery into their writes... yours is like a 3D movie... you just suck me into all of the.. everything that's going on.. if that makes a morsel of sense whatsoever... anyway, I'm like a diligent student in the back of the class soaking up all this knowledge.. amazing write... borderline blasphemous.. lol.. but, still.. amazing.
I love you
Mimic the wind
Travel this billet-doux
Deep within your soul
Amidst the chimes and bells
Because love is still chivalrous
Do not… fall out of this love spell <----see it never fells.... Love is one POWERFUL emotions... HArd to not be addicted to it.. I have to stand back and pray that one day this feeling presides me...
Love is this
Saturdays and Sundays
After Fridays and before Mondays
The space between
Where a king and queen forget
That love is greater than…
Rivers of strawberries
And oceans of honey... wait wait. . . Bend time … refract light
To show you
More beautiful space and time
In my mind
Because you make me love you
With repetition…and admission... i almost fell in love just reading the piece, not with anyone in particular, but I FELT love... dam. very nice man. very ... [+]more
Love is this
Saturdays and Sundays
After Fridays and before Mondays
The space between
Where a king and queen forget
That love is greater than…
Rivers of strawberries
And oceans of honey... wait wait. . . Bend time … refract light
To show you
More beautiful space and time
In my mind
Because you make me love you
With repetition…and admission... i almost fell in love just reading the piece, not with anyone in particular, but I FELT love... dam. very nice man. very nice.
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