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"I DO"
  by TWANGINU


WHEN THE QUESTION WAS ASKED TO ME...IF I DO
MY MIND WENT TO FOREVER
I SAW MY LIFE AND WHAT KIND OF MAN I WOULD BE
I SAW THAT EVERYDAY I DID WHATEVER IT TOOK TO MAKE YOU SMILE
AND YOU WERE MY BEST FRIEND TO THE END
WE HAD SOME HARD TIMES
BUT OUR LOVE CAME OUT ON TOP
WE STAYED TOGETHER EVEN AS OLD PEOPLE...
WITH GRAY AND WHITE HAIR
(YOU WERE MY BABY)
AND I WILL LOVE YOU MORE THEN...THEN I DO NOW
SO STANDING HERE...WE BOTH IN ALL WHITE
LOOKING BEAUTIFUL TOGETHER
AND EVERYBODY IS WAITING FOR ME TO ANSWER
I LOOK IN YOUR EYES WITH SO MUCH HOPE
I SAY I DO
KNOWING FOR SURE THAT EVERYTHING IS GOING TO BE OK
CAUSE I SEEN FOREVER WITH YOU
AND I KNOW YOU'RE THE ONE

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Date Submitted: Jan 16, 2009 (06:48 PM)
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  Kandi Kane
11/18/09 (01:06 PM) 
This is the kind of love everyone should have. People shouldn't be with someone who they cant see in their future. Forever wont last unless you can see it in the present. Simple as that. Nice work.

  Bubblicious
11/08/09 (07:27 PM) 
nice write

  ButterPCon77
11/03/09 (10:54 AM) 
loved it much love keep ur pen flowin

  ToCute4U
10/25/09 (10:01 PM) 
Wow this is very good, and nicely written. Love that forreal

  Ladi Nia
09/17/09 (12:34 PM) 
too sweet

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