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"...I Do Love You...Too..."
  by *Miss Toya*
  - This Poem is a response to the poem i do love you by after vision



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I watched your emotions...
.
.
.
As they slowly...
Trickled down...
To the base of your feather...
.
Every single ink drop...
That fell from your fountain...
.
Each painful word...
Down to the letter....
.
.
We wrote together...
.
.
I pen'd from a distance...
.
Editing your heart's...
Default resistance...
.
To my existence...
.
.
I do love you...
.
.
So from left to write...
I'll never hurt you...
.
.
Again...
.
.
Not with my paraphrasin'...
.
My redundant stanzas...
And my perforated...
.
.
Concept...
.
.
Of written reality...
.
.
I read your emotions...
Through a rose colored fallacy...
.
Reading you happy...
Even though you were sad...
.
A.muse.ing myself...
Overlooking my bad...
.
I had...my pad
And wrote on it too...
.
I posed in different prose...
What else could you do...
.
But write me off...
.
Like all was lost...
.
I laughed at your words...
Like they never caused...
.
Your heart to ache...
.
Silly mistakes I make...
.
I don't deserve your thoughts...
How in the world could I take...
.
You for granted...
.
Given the chance un-slanted...
I'll take my time...
And read all of you...
.
I'll read all of you...
Line for line...
Placing no other lines...
Above you...
.
.
.
Because I do love you...too...
.
.
.

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Date Submitted: Oct 30, 2009 (12:27 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 11/14/09 (01:14 AM)
Author: Group: Poetically Ex...
Poem Title: YA BOY LOVE'Z YA TOO

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comment icon  COMMENTS (13)
  KINGLO
11/14/09 (01:16 AM) 
LOVELY

  RedLoveSong
11/01/09 (01:02 AM) 
You are truly one of the best responders (is that a word?..it just looks wrong)...anyway, on this site..you take the original poets piece to heart and birth a masterpiece. I felt every line of this. I could quote every line, but I'll just fav.

  Magic✯
10/30/09 (08:40 PM) 
exceptional ink... loved the concept... and the presentation was wonderful too.

  leethal
10/30/09 (05:00 PM) 
very nice response to a-vision's joint toya! i almost read yours first but i'm glad i didnt. i love ur responsive inks!

  Lady_Style
10/30/09 (02:57 PM) 
This was so heartfelt...written wit passion..a beautifully written piece..great ink!

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