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"I Don't Complain"
  by Jesz


1 am:

Layin in bed waitin for him to get here
Cant sleep
so full of anticipation
He honks his horn lettin me know that he's arrived
and i rise from the state of laying
without any hesitation
I take my seat in his 06 Altima
and he leans over and kisses my lips
sucks on the bottom one as
his hands make their way to my hips
he musta missed me
his fingertips migrate to my navel
and there they dance
but only for a few seconds
until i feel my ass lifted up
and sat on top of his lap
i dont complain

By 1:18 am:

My dark blue Gap sweats are
right under my cheeks
Being exposed to the heat the car is exhaling on us
"face the wheel baby"
and i do as im told
Unconsciously placin my hands at 10 and 2
loving this ride..gazin out at my view
his hands firmly sit on my waist
making me bounce on wat we agreed to be mine
quick fuck in the front seat..bodies dont have time
to intertwine
but yet and still
i dont complain

Its almost 1:47 am:

He's made my insides tremble countless times
and he's almost there
fog on all of the windows
palms sweaty from my tight grip
his hands still glued to my waist
no back seat fuckin necessary
driver seat suited us just fine
"fuck lil mama"
he's there and my body shakes from that last orgasm
and im pantin like a dog
and hes now holdin me tighter
i dont want him to let me go
turns me around
and lays my head on his shoulder
breathing in the scent from his tatted up neck
and i doze in his lap
dick still in place
aint nobody complainin..

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Date Submitted: Nov 15, 2008 (03:10 PM)
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  The Mad Poet
11/22/08 (02:11 PM) 
Great storytelling ability...I like your style lil mama...Keep flowing with your words...Very sexy ass write....Nicely done...Much love & respect

  BlessedOne
11/20/08 (05:50 PM) 
I liked your play by play account. It made for a very sensual story. I could see this pony riding adventure.

  Chocolatezeus
11/19/08 (12:27 PM) 
now this is what I am talking about. I love the adventure in this. Makes me want to reinact it all over and over again. This made me nice and heated.

  TheInfamousBab...
11/18/08 (03:02 PM) 
i know I havn't been on in a while... but this was an ill...*giggle*... joint to come back to. You did ya damn thang mama, always and forever a fan.

  PoiZen
11/15/08 (08:10 PM) 
Like a damn movie this is.....your descriptions are awesome.....no doubt

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