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"I feel ya"
  by mandii boo
  - This Poem is a response to the poem )( SECRETS )( by lavish


see now this is where
im suppose to write my heart out
but baby gurl, my feelings
wuld never compare to what yu put out.

i wuld never walk out the door
and leave yu alone.
I will always be here for yu
and together, this is our home.

this is yur family,
this is where yu belong.
we love yu and yu love us.
we've been here all along.

if poetry is the way to let out
then gurl, pour down the rain.
we will listen and undestand
all of yur pain.

most of us been thru a lot too
so we can help each other.
it's like a place where we kno everybody
and learn frum one another.

Baby gurl please don cry.
wipe them tears.
yu can keep goin on
nd forget them bad years.

i jus wanna let yu kno,
when yu write, i'll see.
i'll be here if yur sad
or if yu need me.

this goes out to Lavish. Ily gurlie n/h
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Date Submitted: Jun 08, 2008 (05:27 PM)
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  K.A.S. THE LYR...
08/25/08 (12:39 AM) 
i am feeling the response. a lot of caring and concern in the words saying lean on me when you need me

  REALKISSES
06/25/08 (04:34 PM) 
this was a great response def full of positivity which is needed def a 10

  Lil Vonne
06/16/08 (08:19 PM) 
Ay i giv u yo props on here...i like dis very much. Very beautiful, very sentimental. I give u 10stars on dis. I think it is very nice of you to want to be there as a frin for that gurl....where as you didnt have to that. Much love pimp. Love yah gurl LV. Check me out sumtyme when you git the chance.

  Bum Bum
06/08/08 (10:34 PM) 
i like dis

  DiamondellaDeL...
06/08/08 (06:42 PM) 
"if poetry is the way to let out then gurl, pour down the rain. we will listen and undestand all of yur pain."<--dats some real shit because like i once said..poetry is like my lil ghetto therapy.. its a good stress and depression reliever! coo write

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