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"I GETS NO....(PART 3) PP CHAIN POEM"
  by Holla @ Ur Gurl
  - This Poem is a response to the poem I GETS NO....(PART 2) PP CHAIN POEM by ROXIE


I GETS NO…
LOVE FROM THE SYSTEM AFTER THIS MOTHERFUCKER BEATS MY ASS,
BASTARDS WILLING TO LET HIM WALK ALTHOUGH HE HAS 2 PRIOR DOMESTIC VIOLENCE CHARGES FROM THE PAST
NO GUIDE DANCE ALTHOUGH THEY KNOW THIS WAS MY FIRST TIME
HOW THE FUCK CAN I PRESS CHARGES IF THEY DON’T ACKNOWLEDGE HIS CRIME?

I GETS NO…
LOVE FOR ACCOMPLISHING WHAT I JUST ENDURED
PAIN BEYOND BELIEF SIMPLY TO WALK THROUGH THE DOOR
SMACK MY MOMS IN HER FACE WITH THIS DIPLOMA I JUST GOT
“YOU’LL NEVER AMOUNT TO NOTHING”, WHAT BITCH, YOU THINK I FORGOT???

I GETS NO
LOVE FOR RAISING MY SON ALONE AND TEACHING HIM HOW TO BE A MAN, I DON’T HAVE A DICK AND BALLS BUT SHOWED HIM HOW TO CARRY HIS WELL AND AT ANY COST TAKE A STAND
NO LOVE FOR MAKING HIM UNDERSTAND THAT A WOMAN HE SHOULD NEVER HURT
NO APPRECIATION FOR TEACHING HIM A REAL WOMAN’S WORTH

I GETS NO…
APPLAUDS OR STANDING OVATIONS FOR BEING THE FIRST BITCH TO GET OUT MY HOOD ON A JOURNEY FOR A BETTER LIFE
WHILE THE BITCHES ON THAT OLD HOOD STILL SUCKING DICK IN THE “HOPES” OF BECOMING THE DRUG DEALERS WIFE
NO RESPECT THAT I AINT A MONEY HUNGRY BITCH AND I DO HAVE HOPES AND DREAMS, NO ONE TO PAT ME ON THE BACK EVERY FUCKING TIME THAT I SCREAMED…

NO NO NO NO NO…

NONE!!!

NO FUCKING LOVE FROM THIS BASTARD I PROCLAIMED TO LOVE TILL DEATH DID US PART, HE WAS BUSTING ANOTHER BITCHES PUSSY UP WHILE TEARING MY HEART APART
NO FUCKING DECENCY TO LET ME LIVE MY LIFE AND GO ON WITHOUT HIS ABUSE, NOT ONE FUCKING TIME DID HE EVER LEAVE WITHOUT LEAVING A PART OF ME BRUISED…

I GETS NO…
LOVE FROM SOCIETY BECAUSE I SPEAK MY MIND, SAY WHAT I SAY, AND DON’T GIVE A FUCK IF YOU CAN’T HANDLE THE TRUTH
GET YOURSELF TOGETHER MOTHER FUCKERS AND STOP RUINING OUR YOUTH,
NO LOVE FOR SPEAKING ABOUT WHAT SO MANY WOMEN WONT DARE SPEAK
NO LOVE FOR TALKING FOR THEM THROUGH MY PEN, MAKING MY POEMS AVAILABLE TO THEM ON REPEAT
NO LOVE FOR TRYING TO MAKE EVERYBODY UNDERSTAND MY PLAN
NO ONE CAN GET MY MESSAGE ACROSS THE WAY THAT I CAN
NO LOVE FOR BEING JUST ME AND NOT GIVING A FUCK… NOW SCROLL BACK UP AND READ THIS AGAIN CUZ I KNOW THIS SHIT LEFT YOU STUCK…
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Date Submitted: Jun 12, 2007 (05:31 PM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 06/12/07 (06:15 PM)
Author: XPERIENCE
Poem Title: I GETS NO....(PART 4...

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comment icon  COMMENTS (34)
  Showcase
07/23/07 (05:55 PM) 
damn wow this was omg I got to stop for a minute and appluad you on this wonderful write well spoken and moe so truth in ever word that was written. You too cold on the pen I feel you now you can drop the mic smile and walk away leaving them in shock and awe as I was awesome awesome awesome

  DiamondellaDeL...
07/23/07 (05:47 PM) 
"I GETS NO… APPLAUDS OR STANDING OVATIONS FOR BEING THE FIRST BITCH TO GET OUT MY HOOD ON A JOURNEY FOR A BETTER LIFE WHILE THE BITCHES ON THAT OLD HOOD STILL SUCKING DICK IN THE “HOPES” OF BECOMING THE DRUG DEALERS WIFE"<<<<---DAT SHYT IZ SO DAMN TRU!!!!!!!!! U KNO WAT U GET MAH RESPECT N STAND OVATIONZ CUZ AZ A MOTHER WE DO WAT HAVE TA HAVE DO YA KNO!!!!!!!!!

  that real nell...
06/20/07 (12:35 AM) 
damn im feelin you but you aint alone im reppin for these women to in my poems please believe like hoe ass niggas aint shit and you can neva fuck over a queen but yea you real you gotta be and the love you aitn gettin make you strong

  Nilla
06/19/07 (06:03 AM) 
Mz. Holla! STAND THA FUKK UPPPP BITTTCHHH! =] You did this one out like you ain't never done nun else out. Spittin' straight fuckin' venom thru this whole write right chea. ALL MUH FUKKIN' LOVE, BRUHH!

  CCGroovy
06/19/07 (01:16 AM) 
Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeessss, indeed. My monitor is smokin'; this thing is so hott!!!

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