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"I HATE YOU"
  by Georgiapeach21


I hate you oh so much
I wish I never met you
I wish I could forget you
I wish you would just fall off the earth
Cause with you around all I do is get hurt
I know Im not the first one to tell you this
But to be honest you really anint shit
Fools fools fools waist they time
I don’t want you
Hell you anint never been mine
Plus compared to you, ive always been a dime
All the pain you put me through
Laugh it off now but Im gone be the champion when its all through
And I want you to know that I hate you
HOW COULD YOU
HOW DARE YOU
Im way to smart
To let somebody like you break my heart
I was true, I was faithful
Do you know who i am?
You wont get pass this
Cause from day to day
Karma is always on its way
Watch me as out of your life I fade away
Next time you see me
It will be your lucky day
Cause from my head down to my toes
Im gone be the sexiest, most independent women walking it out on all these hoe’s
With the jazziest clothes
And what ill be, hell who knows
But I promise whatever it is, at it Im ah be a pro
So goodbye shot fly
Just go away
And come again another day
From this day forth I want you to know
Before I end this rhyme and go
There’s one thing that I truly do
That One thing is I HATE YOU!!
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Date Submitted: Mar 14, 2008 (08:56 PM)
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  lilhazel
04/11/08 (12:37 AM) 
i def. been dere 10 star material all da way shawty dat shyte was deep *~*lilrayray*~*

  ♥Babydol...
03/29/08 (11:40 PM) 
i feel u. it b lyk dat sumtimez

  BTRIII
03/27/08 (08:54 PM) 
OOOOOOO I'm soo glad that "you" isn't me. Although I must admit, I laughed at the part "Next time you see me It will be your lucky day " It's hot though. Hopefully he realizes that he just lost the Rhyming Queen and you rise up like a phoenix. But above all, loved it.

  ShawtyV
03/27/08 (01:34 AM) 
haha i've definitely felt like this before with a few people in my life.. these folks don't know who they messin with!!! lol they gone regret losing a good thing... keep doin ur thang ma... i'm lovin ur works.. 10 stars :0)

  SyMpHoNy
03/19/08 (02:55 PM) 
the greatest therapy for hurt is to release how we feel. I love that you are doing that. Independent indeed. "I HATE YOU" very strong words, you should work on loving him in spite of and wish him all the best. Then you'll know that you are truly strong. All the crap he did probably was in your favor, he's a looser he doesn't deserve you and that karma, that's a bitch. It will catch up to him. Great write, keep up the good work. Phenomenal piece.

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