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"i have feelings 4 u baby"
  by liljaylnn


i love u ever since u walk into my life maybe da reson y i don't talk like i use 2 is because maybe i'm still trying 2 see if i can tell u how much i care 4 u i have feelings 4 u and i never knew as a female dat i will have feelings 4 my wife dat i care 4 maybe wearing dat ring says alot baby be in my arms not n someone elses and never change 4 me i told u alot from all da secerts and da famous things i do and dats being a rapper and i don't kno how i can express my feelings towards u anymore baby it's hard 2 say anything 2 u because every poem or things u say out ur mouth is makin me go speechless and i can't tell u da real reson y u make me smile i miss havin u laughin and i miss jus holdin u baby jus be in my life have feelings 4 me baby jus see dat cause if i didn't love u i wouldn't be expressin myself 2 u i love u always and 4ever
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Date Submitted: Jun 10, 2008 (06:20 PM)
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  Shaboogie
10/30/08 (10:22 AM) 
this is sweet but i hate how u younger generations spell how u pronounce shit it really irks me and detracts from the beauty of your prose. I read this becasue i could see it was filled with raw emotion keep writng and as always stay up

  Debbie
06/10/08 (06:46 PM) 
AWW THIIS IS SO SWEET...may god bless you!!!!

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