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"i keep walkin"
  by acey


i keep walkin

tryin not to look back
if i turn around i will never get out
i will be stuck again and no one will help me out

i keep walkin

u seemed to find away to hurt me again
but u keep saying im a changed man
one girl lead to two
two lead to three
but in my mind i know he loves me
but its not good for me

so i keep walkin

tryin not to cry
cause i dont want to love no one else
i think about him everyday
enoring every man that comes my way

but i keep walkin

with pride
i might be hurt in the inside
but i know i have to keep walkin
with god on my side
.....and we both keep walkin
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Date Submitted: Nov 08, 2008 (11:30 AM)
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  Lique
12/08/08 (01:30 AM) 
alright lady, i'm not going to say to usual that ppl say that have no idea what this feels like...the love you have fo rhim is real...it perseveres...I know...and if you know he loves you, then you know he loves you...that's it. but what you may not be thinking is that he may not be ready to accept or give you the love that he has...he may not know how to yet...bottom line and you already know what's up..the second to last line said it...GOD...pray...that's all I've been doing and the stress ha...
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  *Miss Toya*
12/07/08 (07:53 PM) 
very nice...yeah...sometimes you do just have to keep walking even though it may not be what you wanna do but you know what's best for you....in the end...everything will work itself out for the better...you have god on your side and he will lead you the right way...

  Becca Boo
12/01/08 (10:34 AM) 
aw.....sometime i feel i should do the same...but i'm lost!!- Great Write!!!

  jawillis
11/21/08 (02:15 PM) 
it feels like you wrote my situation with my ex . . . it's very hard to let go even if you know its not good for you

  RUTHiE
11/21/08 (12:47 PM) 
yep... just keep on walkin and writing of course.. lol.. nice write!

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