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"i knew her in darkness"
  by METAMORPHTACON


she embrassed my
stated decomposition
because I loved her
to death
under the moon we cried
cursing the sun
for causing tears to dry
preferring our love
to be blind
void of light
facing the dark unknown
knowing that truth
becomes veiled with sight
images are distorted
mask are worn
lies get sworn
hearts become torn
which is why we thrive
in this darkness
its where all things
are born
so we lay naked
and exposed
with arms wrapped tightly
lips speak while touching
whispering softly
in the midnight of our love
where secrets become nothing
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Date Submitted: Oct 14, 2009 (11:38 AM)
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  santiago\\\\\\...
10/15/09 (01:28 PM) 
i bite down on this piece my friend ... i cannot allow myself to let go of an artform like yours... this is almost to much for me to handle lol though my desires do stem deep ....it feels nice to actually hear the surface thought's of someone that takes the senses with them on their journey....im infautuated with your this style of writing and i thank you for allowing me the chance to delve this deep into you...Santi'

  Cornfed
10/14/09 (06:58 PM) 
Short powerful lines express your spinning mind! Neat ink!

  Untouched_Soul
10/14/09 (05:36 PM) 
oh damn ... such a sensually dark expression. "hearts become torn which is why we thrive in this darkness its where all things are born so we lay naked and exposed with arms wrapped tightly lips speak while touching whispering softly in the midnight of our love where secrets become nothing "

  คว...
10/14/09 (11:41 AM) 
why do i find myself faving all your work...this was so heartfelt and had a twinge of sexiness to it....got my internals racing over here....i am loving this....

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