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"I KNOW WHAT YOU DID LAST NIGHT..."
  by MAVRICK


Heart racing, voice whispering, everything is intense
all senses feel alive, prelude to a satisfying existence
looking around, nerves spark lively, body electric style
hoping nobody sees you, when really you do, is it all worth while
wait not now, okay come on the coast is clear
okay, we're almost ready, the time might be very near
ohh my god, I feel so alive, how could doing something wrong feel so good
everyone is guilty of doing it, folks in hoods, suburbs and woods
fuck it, i'll feel guilty about it later
my brain can't register responsiblity,
when sensual excitement is what I savor
now, lets do this right here, screams are muffled,
moans through hand-clasped mouths making sounds
all this is the excitment of what happens
when you creepy bastards are sneaking around...
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Date Submitted: Oct 05, 2008 (10:28 PM)
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  VANiiT33
10/08/08 (08:07 PM) 
This was a nice poem. I love the twist of things!!! Chck out my poem freestyle it is similar!!!

  danceluv
10/06/08 (01:54 PM) 
danm someone busted..lol but nice write flow was on point.. very creative.. keep doin you sweety

  DaddysGirl
10/05/08 (10:36 PM) 
Who, Me? "Sneaky"....NOOOO! Never. I have NO idea what you might be referring to. Unless you have pictures & a DNA evidence. In this case, I'll claim temp insanity and none of your evidence will hold up in court. LOL! Intense write, great word usage. I was expecting someone to orgasm but hey, you can't win them all... maybe next time? (Hint Hint)

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