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"I laid my ♥ on a football field"
  by *~§Poetic§~*


I laid my heart on a football field
Watched him score a touch down
With pieces of me on the bottom of his cleats

Yet he never took the time to see
along the road to victory there
was me..... on the bottom of his cleat
Ran over.....

He just crushed me
Took advantage of my vulnerability
I let down my walls for him
Gave him the key....
So he could open me

And he did
he had me wide open
and each time he'd tell a lie
he'd just fill me up with
false hope thinking that once
things looked up

We would be in love.... like i had already been

Before I laid my heart on a football field
and watched him score a touchdown
with pieces of me on the bottom of his cleats

I had loved him with all that was me
It didn't matter if i didn't have no one
as long as i had him that was enough for me

Silly me using quick fucks and placid I love yous
to justice a love that never existed between me and you
And i guess its all my fault that in the end i'm the one brought to tears
Once again....

Makes me wonder does the heart ache for me ever end

I laid my heart on a football field and watched him score a
touch down with pieces of me on the bottom of his cleats

Now i guess the only thing i can do walk on to the field
and take your shoe and try my best to preserve the little
thats left of this heart...

I'm going to need it in my new start.....

A foot ball player ran over my heart
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Date Submitted: Mar 27, 2009 (09:12 PM)
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  Advocate
09/02/09 (11:06 PM) 
heartbreaking. i must say that one particular line stood out to me, "We would be in love.... like i had already been". it triggered in my head that this was the definition of a one way street of love. doing what you can to keep the false hope of love open in you eyes while his eyes do not see the same vision. "we" being in love is so far from "me" being in love. a sadden tone placed over this one. amazing work.

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07/23/09 (03:14 AM) 
"Silly Me Using QUICK FUCKS AND PLACID I LUV U'S 2 justify a love that never exsisted between me and u..." That part was very deep and caught me...but the creativity of this mixed with the raw emotion and love that went wrong i can dig it queen i hope things are going better 4u...but i gotta give this all the love and repsect possible...u already kno Goddess... J.

  StraY12
06/26/09 (06:02 PM) 
Damn...I don't know how else to put it...this was nice...real...I'm diggin' the realities in your poetry...keep doin' you!

  datboyjada
06/25/09 (06:50 PM) 
love da concept n da way u put dis. da title was catchy. mind of thought. they can't do nothin to u if u put dem on I.R (Injured Reserve). love dis drop

  3rd_Coast
05/22/09 (04:15 PM) 
DAMN this is straight heartache and pain. great concept in te write. Very descriptive.. Your heart will heal soon. 10 starz definately

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