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"i love you.... BUT."
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i love you [______] with all my heart.
i swore nothing could tear us apart.
BUT
i question is it time to move on?
because the love we once shared is now gone.
the words "I LOVE YOU" no longer hold the same meaning as a few months before
my heart is torn
i thought we would last forever.
i have you
BUT
the reality is that i need you
i just wonder do you need me?
am i that replaceable?
the feelings i have answer yes.
sense you seeking more than i can give
for what i offer is not enough
contemplating whats next
should we just go our seperate ways?
give my heart time to heal before the next phase?
promise myself not to love again?
before i see whats deep-within the mans heart?
never knew a love like this before
prehaps never to know it again
all i know is
i love you with all my heart
BUT
is it time to finish what we started?
unbind our once entwind loves
depart from everything we ever created.
im just curious to know.
dont want to be used
mislead
and left confused
[________] i love you with all my heart
BUT......
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Date Submitted: Sep 02, 2007 (02:30 AM)
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  BLAXICAN MAMI
06/01/08 (03:27 PM) 
DAMN MAMAZ, DIZ WAS DEEP!!..I CAN DEFINATLY RELATE TO DIZ PIECE RITE HURR!!...AWWW, MAN COUPLE OF MONTHS AGO I WAS FEELIN DAT EXACT SAME WAY BUT I GUESS U JUSS GET OVA IT!!...I GUESS U JUSS REALIZE U WORTH SO MUCH MORE THAN CONFUSION ND HURT!!..WELL BEAUTIFUL POEM BOO..TEN STARZ!!

  Pip
04/05/08 (07:07 PM) 
wow i love this poem! Its very emotional and heartfelt, plus i can really relate to it. Great job 10 starz and a fave!

  Slope
04/04/08 (12:07 AM) 
i hear u niggas take females for granted sumtymes but a nigga gotta b crazy to take u 4 granted. 10 starz

  Blackdymend
12/10/07 (01:42 PM) 
yea gurl, can i say dejavu...i felt this oh too recently. And i chose to let it go becuz it happens, love dies (it hurts whether u ready or not) But theres bigger n better out there n we're so young....so its lyfe..but this poem is a good one...it reflects the feelings of so many....great write

  Legacy
11/19/07 (01:43 AM) 
wwwwwoooooooowwwwwwww you took it there in this one good ass write gurl 10 stars

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