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"I LOVE YOU"
  by mykah


i held your hand today
and i wish you hadn't let me
because i felt the cuts on your skin
and myself was all i could see.

reminded me of my own body
the flesh scarred and torn apart
i wish that i could fix you
whats going on inside your heart?

i look at you to be my saviour
im all broken down you see
but your ment to hold it together
your ment to be stronger than me.

i held your hand today
and i wish you hadn't let me
because i felt the cuts on your skin
and i felt so hollow and empty.

the harm you do to yourself
is crazy beyond belief
the cuts, the drugs, no love
and you say its just relief.

sit down and talk to me
whats going on inside your head?
all i want to do is protect you
for im afraid the next time i see you...
...you'll be dead...
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Date Submitted: Jun 30, 2008 (08:47 AM)
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  Shaded eyes
07/06/08 (03:40 AM) 
Thats was fucking crazy! I love you mykah.XX

  Crazy Baby
06/30/08 (08:38 PM) 
wow this one was like a slap in the face to me. is this bout me? cause i love you 2, and yea i know i need help. thanx mykah this write really opened my eyes i love you heaps!

  ♥Poetic~...
06/30/08 (09:17 AM) 
Wow this is really deep. didn't know where you were going w/ it @ first but loved the ending. this isn't something people normally talk about so loved that approached the subject and the way you wrote it. 10*

  LiL Chris 13
06/30/08 (09:02 AM) 
Damn that's deep I like the end tho keep writing 10starz on this 1

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