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"I Love You"
  by Def Nation


How wonderful it is to be your child
The benefits seem to be never ending,
Never fleeting, always at the beginning,
Meaning that your grace seems to always feel brand new
If we are all one body I desire to be the tattoo
That covers the body and speaks of you!
Joy comes in the morning, so depressing nights can never keep me
Your words speak of my bondage, and then ORDER releasing
Feasting on your commands and desires
Standing close to the flame in hopes that I would be on fire
To be a light to this dark callous planet
That often has me compromising until I scream, “I can’t stand it!”
God Damn It! But wait…if he did that, he’d damn me
Because they are no more sinful than I can be.
Can’t believe that you didn’t scrap us all and start again
Instead you sacrificed the creator for the creation to purify the sin?
I have no idea what to speak, so I’ll just say I Love You
And forgive me when my priorities get twisted, because I mean to put NO one above you.
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Date Submitted: Feb 20, 2008 (05:19 PM)
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  Demon of Darkn...
02/25/08 (07:08 AM) 
STRAIGHT TO THE POINT AND BEAUTIFULLY EXEXCUTED..I LOVE DA REALNESS OF YA FLOW.. YA WORD PLAY SPOKEN FROM DA HEART AND FULL OF EMOTION.. AGAIN NICE PIECE..

  PoetTayla
02/25/08 (04:03 AM) 
I would have never proved or justified why I wrote the words that came out of my mouth. For you to justify what you did means in some form or shape you thought you were wrong. Even if it was a mustard seed worth of thought you still agreed enought to make you position clear... It was uncalled for. The context in which you used you vainful phrase was totally necessary.. 10 stz

  WrItN4aPurpse
02/24/08 (06:23 PM) 
Beautiful and straight up touching bro!!! The ending was perfect... but the part/lines that caught me was "can't believe you didn't scrap us all and start again, instead you sacrificed the creator for the creationto purifythe sin!!!" Never heard a sayin like that... I gotta fav this write bro..

  --->ROXIE<---
02/22/08 (03:26 AM) 
I CAN SEE WHERE U WENT WITH THE WHOLE GOD DAMN THING...U WOULD HAVE TO READ IT CLOSELY TO UNDERSTAND THAT U WASN'T TAKING GOD'S NAME IN VAIN...DONT TRIP IT'S UR POEM AND IT IS UR RIGHT TO GET UR FEELINGS OUT THERE...NICE

  only1Anastasia
02/22/08 (02:46 AM) 
wow this ia amazing.....poetic tougne I might add....

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