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"I MADE THE CALL..."
  by mscookie2u
  - This Poem is a response to the poem Cry Out Loud by Syndel


LISTEN SISTER,
I JUST NEED A MINUTE OF YOUR TIME,
I KNOW YOU HAVE YOUR OWN PROBLEMS,
BUT I WAS HOPING YOU CAN HELP ME,
WITH MINE.
SEE IM STRUGGLING RIGHT NOW,
NOT FINANCIALLY ,
BUT EMOTIONALLY.
TRYING TO STAY ON THE RIGHT PATH IS SO HARD,BECAUSE IM TRYING SO HARD.
SOMETIMES I WANT TO GIVE UP,
CRY A FEW TEARS AND JUST SAY
F**K IT.
BUT I CANT.
SEE THOSE TWO LITTLE EYES OVER THERE,
THOSE ARE MINES.
HE LOOKS TO ME EVERYDAY FOR SUPPORT,
SO TO GIVE UP NOW WOULD BE OUT OF LINE.
SO I GET UP , WASH MY FACE, BRUSH MY TEETH
AND GET BACK ON MY GRIND.
ITS SO HARD.
BLACK WOMAN, BIG WORLD, NO SUPPORT.
FIGHTING EVERYDAY TO KEEP THE BALL IN MY COURT.
OR BECOME DECEASED.
I CANNOT FIGHT THIS STRESSFUL BEAST,
IN MY HOME I DEMAND PEACE,
THAT WHY I ASK THE EVIL TO LEAVE.
NOW ITS JUST ME.
IM SORRY TO BOTHER YOU SISTER ,
I JUST NEEDED AN EAR,
I JUST NEEDED TO VENT
IF FOR VENTING IS WHY YOUR HERE.
THANKS
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Date Submitted: Aug 31, 2008 (11:35 AM)
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comment icon  POEM RESPONSES (1)
Date: 09/01/08 (03:38 PM)
Author: Syndel
Poem Title: Yes I am here

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comment icon  COMMENTS (12)
  Ordained2Chang...
10/12/08 (01:00 PM) 
It's nice to have someone you can have around to vent to.

  Diemenz
09/06/08 (03:40 AM) 
well done

  Tpoet
09/01/08 (08:02 PM) 
great response love it

  Syndel
09/01/08 (04:20 PM) 
I love this response and of course knowing me I had to come again this touched me truly thank you

  touchdapearl2
09/01/08 (02:58 AM) 
this was also on point and a very honest piece,great response

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