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"I MISS MY BABY!"
  by TUANE


I TOLD HER TO JUS STAY OUT THE STRRET
STAY IN THE YARD
I SAID ABOUT A THOUSAND TIMES
BUT SHE DIDNT LISTEN
SHE WAS A TRUE SOLJA TO B SO YOUNG
4YRS OLD TO BE EXACT
SHE WAS HIT THE 1ST TIME AT THE STORE
BUT SHE ONLY LOST AN EAR
THE 2ND TIME WAS WORST
SHE HAD PERMINATE EYE AND CHEEK DAMAMGE
SHE WAS JUS ABOUT TOTALLY BLIND IN ONE EYE
I COLDNT AFFORD THE MEDICAL BILLS
BUT SHE STLL HAD HER RIGHT EYE
THE 3RD TIME WAS WORST
I WENT IN THE HOUSE FOR ONE SECOND AND I HEARD A SCREAM
A GUY FLYING UP THE STRRET IN REVERSE HIT HER
I JUST COULDNT FORGIVE MYSELF
ALL THOSE PPL SITTIN ON MY PORCH DIDNT EVEN THINK TO LOOK OUT FOR HER
THIS TIME SHE HAD A LOT OF EXTERNAL AND INTERNAL DAMAGE
SHE WAS DOING PRETTY GOOD TIL WE HAD TO TAKE HER TO THE HOSPITAL
IT GOT TO THE POINT WHERE THERE WASNT ENOUGH OXYGEN GETTIN TO HER BRIAN
SHE WAS TOTALLY BLIND IN ONE EYE AND COULD BARELY SEE OUT THE OTHER
I COULDNT BARE TO SEE HER LIKE THAT
I WENT HOME TO GET A LITTLE SLEEP
I GOT THE CALL EARLY THE NEXT MORNING
I WAS AT SCHOOL
I WAS GOING TO SEE HERE WHEN I GOT OUT
THEY SAID THERE WAS NOTHING THEY COULD DO
MY BABY WAS GONE.....
IT HIT ME HARD, BUT IT HIT MY MOTHER EVEN HARDER
WE DIDNT KNOW WHAT WE WERE GOIN TO DO
BUT WE STAYED STRONG FOR EACH OTHER
WE GO THROUGH IT.......
I MISS MY 1999 DARK BLUE FORD TAURUS!
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Date Submitted: Oct 23, 2007 (02:09 AM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (26)
  Britni Reign
07/23/09 (11:43 PM) 
aw lol cute poem

  southernLady
07/19/08 (10:37 PM) 
dude..i thought this was about your child! this is too funny!

  Lex Libra Baby...
06/26/08 (10:56 PM) 
UGH. HAD 2 GO BAK AND READ IT TWICE. Thinking you lost a daughter. Dang Taurus. lol. this is good.

  MizzBrandon
12/23/07 (01:05 AM) 
Oh my goodness, Im so mad and happy for that ending at the same time, lol great write what a twist I love it.

  rena boo
12/19/07 (01:09 PM) 
man i cant stop reading dat

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