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"I miss you."
  by Elle


Its been so long since I've been blessed with your words

I've missed you.

I miss the way your words would bombard me
With feelings of Hope,
Of Love,
Of Hurt,
Of Hate,
Of Truth.
And it hurts to feel the time that has slipped by
As intangible as it is I can see it with my eyes
Feel it with my heart
No matter how hard I try there is no mask that will help me disguise
I only hope that I have not lost it
That I have not lost your words that enveloped me
With the time that's slipped by
And as I type these lines I remember
I remember the excitement that would drive these fingers to pound on these keys
The poems you would write that made me weak at the knees
I fell in-Love with your words
With all of them
Even the one's others didn't feel were deserved
And all hours of the day
It didn't matter if I was at work or at play
You helped me slip away from the mundane

I know that I left you
It was something I had to do
But know that I have missed you
Let me make it up to you...



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Date Submitted: Nov 08, 2008 (02:13 AM)
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  poetriboi
03/18/09 (11:41 PM) 
lol, just realized i commented on this before hahah and it was just as bomb keep it up

  drmbabyboy
02/18/09 (02:53 PM) 
I missed you to Elle more than you'll ever know....Everytime I write I write fo you.

  Jazzman
12/18/08 (10:50 PM) 
Wow I must be tired because I really messed up that last message. lol!

  Jazzman
12/18/08 (10:49 PM) 
WOW; THIS MAY SOUND CRZY BUT I JUST RED THIS FROM THE BOTTOM UP AND IT MAKES SINCE NO HOW YOU DO IT. GREAT JOB

  dontnohow
11/24/08 (08:23 PM) 
feels great when ur makin things up 2 the person u was missin and lovin...

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