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"I More than Like You"
  by Laydii Lyric
  - This Poem is a response to the poem If This Isnt Love by Laydii Lyric


i actually had butterflies writing this
please enjoy
...

He sent you to me
us as-
complete strangers in this big world full
of impersonaters wearing beautiful
masculine drama masks
passing as God's give to true emotion
passed him

and then

he showed you to
in chance meetings that ended up with us
breathing the
same air
inhaling perfumed and cologned scents
and exhaling
that feeling we both thought we would never
...feel again...

and-
until the end:
I dont know if this really
full bloomed like that has merely blossomed into
what will eventually be
me and you
but
whatever it is
.
.
.
I like it
* proceeds to sing to self*

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Date Submitted: Jul 04, 2009 (09:31 PM)
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comment icon  COMMENTS (4)
  Ladii Qui
07/06/09 (12:07 AM) 
beautiful sis

  B. Rose
07/05/09 (01:12 AM) 
Aww this was beautifully written... nicely done Keish

  Dimplez
07/04/09 (11:46 PM) 
someone's been bitten lol, beautifully penned sis, i know the feeling

  Amayzn
07/04/09 (09:50 PM) 
That is a very deep intense emotional piece...although it's not long, it says a whole lot..I like it...

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